Comments byINTRANSIT, 1581–1600 back. Include replies

on some deleted poem 6 Oct 2002, 10:39 AM
This feels strangely about me. I'm not trying to be presumtuous or egotistical, I see myself with relation to poemranker in this. Seriously. Thank you. 8 if you wish.
on can't by nentwined 7 Oct 2002, 5:35 AM
Still at war with the sleep monster I see. If you've got a little writers block, relax, inspiration will find you. In the meantime,hope all is well on the other side of my screen,and you're having sucess with your pets. Thanks for backing PR the way you do:)
on some deleted poem 7 Oct 2002, 7:59 AM
And many others who don't grace the silver screen, as well. Of course it's the public who puts them on that pedestal, should we never use them???
on The Moment of Elevation by vulcan 7 Oct 2002, 8:01 AM
Don't know where the quote came from,but it fits. Beautiful.
on some deleted poem 7 Oct 2002, 8:06 AM
Qute the statement(s) here. Take this piece to another level, I think. Massage it just a little.
on some deleted poem 7 Oct 2002, 8:10 AM
YES! RUN! LET YOUR EMOTIONS BE FREE! FULL THROTTLED FUN ! NO OTHER WAY!
on can't by nentwined 7 Oct 2002, 8:19 AM
Hey NEN, dont wanna pitch a bitch but I'm curious as to why some can post moree pieces than others? I think 3 a week is fine considering there are 700 plus on this site now. Just my curiosity and opinion.
on some deleted poem 8 Oct 2002, 6:42 AM
I don't know if this is directed at me or not. If it is, I get your points. Mr P&K, I apologize for attacking you the way I did. Certainly uncalled for. I read the NY times article, you made another valid point. D.A., somehow I managed to hit a nerve with you also. Your points with regard to my Haiku were correct. I have managed to make this site feel click-ish and myself unwelcome.I wish it were different. Thanks for your time.
on Recess by horus8 12 Oct 2002, 1:03 PM
Normally I run and hide from lyrics. I don't want to ruin a musicians piece by saying some thing about something I know nothing about. (That was circular). This piece I liked. Sad but I liked it.9
on Turquoise by ams 12 Oct 2002, 1:08 PM
Yeah, but did you learn anything? HA HA. Liked it.8
on Limmerick, Starring Andy by MuDvAyNe 12 Oct 2002, 1:11 PM
Goofy n clean fun.
on Limmerick, Starring Andy by MuDvAyNe 12 Oct 2002, 1:12 PM
On second thought......
on Just a Girl by w~* ATHENA *~w 13 Oct 2002, 6:03 AM
I picked up a connection between husband/boyfriend and a newborn. Slightly scary but endearing too.8
on some deleted poem 13 Oct 2002, 6:09 AM
Sadly, there's nothing more powerful to a mans ego than this. However, this blade swings both ways. No changes.
on some deleted poem 13 Oct 2002, 12:17 PM
I never did those things, but this still socked me in the gut. I still owe you a poem, workin' on it.9
on some deleted poem 13 Oct 2002, 6:14 PM
Does'n matter to me, we'll self destruct with or without god, I think. Good poem though.
on some deleted poem 13 Oct 2002, 6:23 PM
EASY GIRL! The energy you spend being angry could be better spent to improve your writing. Poetry is about feeling,which you are obviously not lacking. However, a larger vocabulary would help, and help us overlook the "wut" and "u" as well. There are times those can be used, just not on a regular basis. Try again, maybe something a little smaller in size too, OK?
on Dying for a Dowry by Blue Magpie 13 Oct 2002, 6:28 PM
Where did the quote come from? Good work, very serious tone. The truth stings but the solution isn't always easy. I pray,every little bit helps. If you care,9
on One Country by poetandknowit 14 Oct 2002, 6:42 AM
Quite the impressive piece,sir. Um, my skills are not at this level yet but I tripped over "still feels and think fertile". A typo maybe? I felt the presence of a winery. I enjoy watching you and god's wife banter.
It's funny and I learn small things too. Thanks.
on Few Words by Tom Colebrooke 14 Oct 2002, 9:25 AM
All three are quite enjoyable. You like bees, and honey. Sounds like you like women. You have humor, very important. Thanks for the laugh,welcome,enjoy!888