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An Action (Free verse) by joho117
Some actions speak louder than words, With the simplest of actions You can speak to the deaf. With this action you give a gift, A piece of joy and sunshine That can brighten one's day Sometimes it is the result of joy, But it is always the source of joy. A smile takes but a moment, But the memories of it last forever.

Down the ladder: Sweet and Sour

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.25
Weighted score: 4.7913947
Overall Rank: 11218
Posted: October 1, 2002 9:00 PM PDT; Last modified: October 1, 2002 9:00 PM PDT
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[7] INTRANSIT @ 64.12.96.237 | 2-Oct-02/10:04 AM | Reply
This and "Tomorrow" are good. Work upwards from here. The other two are beneath you.
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