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Free verse № 18411

An Action

by joho117

Member since 2002 · Posted 1 Oct 2002 · 1 comment

Some actions speak louder than words, With the simplest of actions You can speak to the deaf. With this action you give a gift, A piece of joy and sunshine That can brighten one's day Sometimes it is the result of joy, But it is always the source of joy. A smile takes but a moment, But the memories of it last forever.

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[7] INTRANSIT 2-Oct-02/10:04 AM Reply
This and "Tomorrow" are good. Work upwards from here. The other two are beneath you.