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Cardiovascular workout formula (Lyric) by abi As I was doing my daily run
I worked this out just for fun
How to know if you are fit
Its easy just use your spit
Incline your head back as you go
And just let your spittle go
If it hits
Thats it
You aint fit !
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Posted: September 7, 2002 5:48 AM PDT; Last modified: September 7, 2002 5:48 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.7913947 Overall Rank: 11217 Comments:
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vulcan @ 80.242.1.90
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7-Sep-02/7:42 AM
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HaHaHa!your poem's word was this!(not more laugh even!just hahaha!)So 3.thanks
Quite jolly ! Even for a comic piece the repetition of "go" in lines 5 and 6 is iritating !
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