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Cardiovascular workout formula (Lyric) by abi

As I was doing my daily run I worked this out just for fun How to know if you are fit Its easy just use your spit Incline your head back as you go And just let your spittle go If it hits Thats it You aint fit !

andrew barnes 21-May-05/12:25 PM
Quite jolly ! Even for a comic piece the repetition of "go" in lines 5 and 6 is iritating !




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