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remember (Free verse) by jfconnor
an old lady tends a graveside shes been there for many hours teardrops fill her eyes as she tenderly lays some flowers many years they were together many years as man and wife a very speacil bond they shared throughout there life but he was getting tired god did what he thought to be best god saw he was in pain so he took him to rest so she waits for that day when her pain is at an end when she will be back in the arms of her lover and her friend John Frankie Connor Copyright ??2002 John Connor

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.25
Weighted score: 4.7913947
Overall Rank: 11211
Posted: August 26, 2002 12:20 AM PDT; Last modified: August 26, 2002 12:20 AM PDT
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[7] Sigh'ense... @ 66.214.45.238 | 26-Aug-02/11:58 AM | Reply
How sad but true... Nicely felt by Da1
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