on The Fucktory by horus8
2 Oct 2003, 7:03 PM
s-4 you left out a k. on purpose probably. no. I don't mean a k as in A.K.-47 either. and you're a fam crammin toyota sienna mini van. give it up.
on water falls by Bill Z Bub
2 Oct 2003, 8:11 PM
can you teach me how to do that? It is sooo terribly missing from my poetry. much better sitting this way it is it is. 9.5 because this was easy for you.
on some deleted poem
3 Oct 2003, 4:58 PM
love the lost and find feel here. like stumbling around an automotive junkyard.
on some deleted poem
3 Oct 2003, 5:01 PM
unscramble this THEN invert it. LISTEN for the rhythm. read it aloutd to yourself. it fixes things. promise.
on Under Blood Oak by horus8
3 Oct 2003, 5:05 PM
This is near top-of-your-game stuff. Great tripodal balance you have with the serious/silly/outrageous. thats for you. personally.
on Who are the best poets on poemranker? (A list by me) by Jeremi B. Handrinos
4 Oct 2003, 5:48 AM
-inner taste- the bottom line to everything. I would like to see this updated in 3-6 months to hopefully include a mr. rockmage and a mrs. Italy angel. thank you for.....just being you.
on some deleted poem
4 Oct 2003, 3:02 PM
"still a practicing nomad"- the cool chart used to stop at poemranker, it seems you have run away with it.
on ocd by FreeFormFixation
4 Oct 2003, 3:40 PM
I think this is more serious than acne.
on Nude pictures of children at work by Shardik
4 Oct 2003, 3:43 PM
one day soon? why not now? i'm feeling a little left out. i haven't recieved my weekly beating in some time. quite woe-some am i.
on some deleted poem
6 Oct 2003, 6:32 AM
no need for accolades from me. an Alka-seltzer, perhaps?
on "Jump or Burn" by horus8
6 Oct 2003, 6:35 AM
Shift s-3 to s-1. or use it as kindling. sock me in the gut, would you?
on the meeting by richa
6 Oct 2003, 1:48 PM
phooey!
on Ghost of Gloaming by Don-Quixote
6 Oct 2003, 2:24 PM
sexual halloween.
on гоÑÑдаÑÑÑва by Wobble McFly
14 Oct 2003, 8:06 AM
2. for mentioning Oprah.
on Love a Duck by fuzzylogicisagimp
14 Oct 2003, 8:59 AM
I saw two canadian geese have a collision just above the ground once. both were incoming from perpendicular angles to land near a body of water.
I also witnessed a ground hog run full-bore and headlong into a curb. This was a faraway day from the other event.
Your poem? These ducks are simply emulating humans. Ducky see. Ducky do.
I also witnessed a ground hog run full-bore and headlong into a curb. This was a faraway day from the other event.
Your poem? These ducks are simply emulating humans. Ducky see. Ducky do.
on some deleted poem
14 Oct 2003, 2:31 PM
Much better than I would have done with the same subject. I've come across more than one separated-from-it's-owner stuffed animal in my travels. i always wonder what happened to the owner.
on An Ode to the cat fish head helmet on your penis by horus8
15 Oct 2003, 6:31 AM
Feeling quite "mild" right then?
on some deleted poem
15 Oct 2003, 2:08 PM
No. However, it did cause an awful lot of people to write bad Czechs.
on Blue Collar Beat by Big Daddy
16 Oct 2003, 12:39 PM
Oh. I see you can't be trusted. Thanks for the warning.
1 Scarface was better.
1 Scarface was better.
on some deleted poem
16 Oct 2003, 4:45 PM
Ohio players. Or Sandusky Ohio. Both?