Comments byINTRANSIT, 921–940 back. Include replies

on some deleted poem 26 Sep 2003, 1:24 PM
stab...and twist and stab...and twist2-3-4-
on some deleted poem 29 Sep 2003, 3:16 PM
Sometimes more IS better. I liked the 1st version, but this was worth the effort. yes.
on EGG by ?-Dave_Mysterious-? 29 Sep 2003, 3:37 PM
I think your caps should be in the middle of line three, giving it somewhat of an arc. Like a small girl grossed out and sqealing. funny funny funny.
on War Grave by Caducus 29 Sep 2003, 3:43 PM
How many years have we been on this planet? And we've still learned nothing. still doing the same ol' same ol'. What's taking Jesu so damned long? Held up in a fast food line no doubt. Maybe just... held up?
on some deleted poem 29 Sep 2003, 3:47 PM
You should write horror films. This scared me.
on Timber! by Shardik 29 Sep 2003, 6:12 PM
Here's a joke for you: knawk knawk....
on the meeting by richa 30 Sep 2003, 8:28 PM
Something tells me this is just right. yes, yes. Somehow I get this and it works. Excellent.
on Afraid by Brittanyy 1 Oct 2003, 6:52 PM
What happened to Gwen? If I may ask.
on whimsicals by nentwined 1 Oct 2003, 6:58 PM
whip-crackin' good.
on Manila by poetandknowit 2 Oct 2003, 6:37 AM
Still angry children dump 1s. Good to see you drop by from time to time. This one has inspired me to try something new. details. ha! imagine that.
on some deleted poem 2 Oct 2003, 6:41 AM
what am I supposed to say to this? good poem? I find no faults or errors. bleh. 9 I'm guessing you probably have something about it (you) don't like.
on some deleted poem 2 Oct 2003, 6:43 AM
hard to follow. Ithink there may be more than 2 people involved here. sounds war-like.
on some deleted poem 2 Oct 2003, 7:04 AM
Obviously, you (read) poetry. I can only imagine where my poetry would go if I read more poetry. gah. This is well thought out. I can take a lesson here.
on some deleted poem 2 Oct 2003, 7:10 AM
and my lesson is creativity when it comes to colors. apricot blush, neopolitan ice cream. excellent.
on some deleted poem 2 Oct 2003, 7:40 AM
another new underground quality poet.
on the way things are goin' by irishfolksuicide 2 Oct 2003, 7:42 AM
bull moo- seems a bit comical. good thought provoker.
on some deleted poem 2 Oct 2003, 7:45 AM
not necessarily. the limerick flip is something new. there's an underlying tension between the van driver and the woman. rewrite this and smoothe the rhythm.
on A London Cafe by mrpresident 2 Oct 2003, 7:49 AM
a bird in the hand....
on angst by nentwined 2 Oct 2003, 6:26 PM
need another drum of coffee/espresso/NOS?
on some deleted poem 2 Oct 2003, 6:28 PM
well, gee. what happened to you?