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"Jump or Burn" (Free verse) by horus8 "Jump or burn?"
Huh... How weird is that?
In a building filling with smoke.
Hundreds of feet above the street.
What will all of those people think?
I think, as I watch my co-workers
lemming towards the stairwells
and suffocation by inhilation.
"Jump or Burn?"
Fuck it then (I pull out my Bic)
Lighting myself on fire
I run around in small circles
Taking the pain as I am engulfed in flames.
"Jump or Burn?"
Now I'll jump.
I'm a control freak.
I'm an entertainer.
Up the ladder:
A Summers Day In Stolen Eden
Down the ladder:
R.I.P "He was the bestest poet ever."
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Posted: October 6, 2003 3:25 AM PDT; Last modified: October 6, 2003 3:30 AM PDTWeighted score: 5.992151 Overall Rank: 1318 Comments:
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INTRANSIT @ 64.12.96.46
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6-Oct-03/6:35 AM
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Shift s-3 to s-1. or use it as kindling. sock me in the gut, would you?
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Jeremi B. Handrinos @ 24.126.113.154
> INTRANSIT
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6-Oct-03/4:17 PM
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Great call, I will for my next edit, tanks mang.
-nod-
10.
Wow, top notch product placement. How much did you get paid sitting at your desk coming up with that one. $650? $850.
3 powdered donuts, a haircut, and sex with my left hand.
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