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"Jump or Burn" (Free verse) by horus8

"Jump or burn?" Huh... How weird is that? In a building filling with smoke. Hundreds of feet above the street. What will all of those people think? I think, as I watch my co-workers lemming towards the stairwells and suffocation by inhilation. "Jump or Burn?" Fuck it then (I pull out my Bic) Lighting myself on fire I run around in small circles Taking the pain as I am engulfed in flames. "Jump or Burn?" Now I'll jump. I'm a control freak. I'm an entertainer.

Jeremi B. Handrinos 6-Oct-03/4:17 PM
Great call, I will for my next edit, tanks mang.




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