Re: somebody's birthday by jay_dace	30-Jul-02/9:01 PM
Your mother is a total fox
Re: she did not by mitchski	30-Jul-02/9:00 PM
good werk
Re: Follow by unknown	30-Jul-02/8:57 PM
I always wanted to play football for the coach.
Re: The Price in December by RWAndersen	30-Jul-02/8:57 PM
Excellent work. You may like some of my poems.
Re: Her Wildfire Addiction by molly	30-Jul-02/8:55 PM
Oh gin..how could you treat me this way
Re: you're never alone by nentwined	30-Jul-02/8:54 PM
Why must you write poetry that taxes my memory and sanity?? Do you find that funny??
Re: Scythe by Isis	30-Jul-02/8:52 PM
GO FOR IT DUDE. You can hit me all you want to/but I don't love you anymore
Re: The Forest Child by forestchild7	30-Jul-02/8:43 PM
good GOD you and -=Dark_Angel=- really have your personas figured out.
Re: mr.oates' surrender by phbiscuit	30-Jul-02/8:42 PM
Mr. is capitalized.
Re: oops by jay_dace	30-Jul-02/8:39 PM
good one
Re: Summer Haiku by waltfreakinwhitman	30-Jul-02/8:39 PM
Just like poison in a vial, this poem is very vile
Re: Word Baskets by powerline	30-Jul-02/8:34 PM
it sucks (the poem) the spelling lacks as well.
Re: Cancel that thought by wlshepherd	30-Jul-02/8:33 PM
YOU SAUCY DANUBE MAIDEN
Re: Meta by nentwined	30-Jul-02/8:28 PM
Doogie Hofsthader (incorrectly spelt) covered this material.
Re: #3 by mikejedw	30-Jul-02/8:23 PM
who/gives/a shit about ants/profundity through obscurity/always a sign of/unclear thought/according to neitzsche and common/sen/se.
Re: Concrete by beakism	30-Jul-02/8:20 PM
excellent work. But tell me: do you have any idea what a cubic yard of concrete weighs? Quite a bit. If there is ANY stage of construction that shouldn't be messed around with it is the one you describe. There is a firm in LA which specializes in cleaning up concrete spills, which happen when the molds and casts are incorrectly constructed. An accident resulting in several hundred tons of concrete to spill out of a mold can easily cost millions of dollars in repair, cleanup and damages. And women don't have a mind for that sort of thing anyway. Good work.
Re: Waiting for my Beautiful Woman by Win	30-Jul-02/8:09 PM
The line spacing is interesting but the poem doesn't say a whole lot.
Re: Petrarchan Sonnet about Love by emilyowey	30-Jul-02/8:08 PM
Yeah. And there's absolutely nothing sexy about douching either (aside from the uncontrollable sobbing). Decent poem.
Re: CoffeeNoBody by webguy	30-Jul-02/8:07 PM
I agree.
Re: Bloody cow by ==Doylum	30-Jul-02/8:02 PM
Replace Sean with Bjorn, read it aloud...etc..spellcheck...good concept though.