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mr.oates' surrender (Free verse) by phbiscuit
cold bleeds into the valley mr.oates calmly plods from field to field to sow and sow seed upon seed of lost labor and stubborn love mr.oates knows death as death and cold descend hand in hand upon the homestead mr.oates sighs mr.oates turns in for once more death and cold take their time knowing spring comes late knowing mr.oates won't try again

Up the ladder: Starlight
Down the ladder: Prophecy

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.2222223
Weighted score: 5.611111
Overall Rank: 2256
Posted: July 10, 2002 10:11 PM PDT; Last modified: July 10, 2002 10:11 PM PDT
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[5] -=SeTTle=- @ 63.214.98.27 | 30-Jul-02/8:42 PM | Reply
Mr. is capitalized.
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