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mr.oates' surrender (Free verse) by phbiscuit

cold bleeds into the valley mr.oates calmly plods from field to field to sow and sow seed upon seed of lost labor and stubborn love mr.oates knows death as death and cold descend hand in hand upon the homestead mr.oates sighs mr.oates turns in for once more death and cold take their time knowing spring comes late knowing mr.oates won't try again

-=SeTTle=- 30-Jul-02/8:42 PM
Mr. is capitalized.




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