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Waiting for my Beautiful Woman (Free verse) by Win
Waiting for my Beautiful Woman
When we are to meet
the two of us
she and I
I come,
not at the time appointed
but in my eagerness,
always
a little early
And she comes,
sometimes early, sometimes on time,
but mostly
just
a little
bit
late
I grow restless standing here,
the space between each second an eternity ...
But when I see her lovely face,
the memory of waiting fades
like the last trace of night when day dawns
and everything is happiness
I smile for her like I can for no one else
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.3
Weighted score: 5.15
Overall Rank: 5217
Posted: July 8, 2002 8:18 PM PDT; Last modified: July 8, 2002 8:18 PM PDT
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