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Waiting for my Beautiful Woman (Free verse) by Win
Waiting for my Beautiful Woman When we are to meet the two of us she and I I come, not at the time appointed but in my eagerness, always a little early And she comes, sometimes early, sometimes on time, but mostly just a little bit late I grow restless standing here, the space between each second an eternity ... But when I see her lovely face, the memory of waiting fades like the last trace of night when day dawns and everything is happiness I smile for her like I can for no one else

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.3
Weighted score: 5.15
Overall Rank: 5216
Posted: July 8, 2002 8:18 PM PDT; Last modified: July 8, 2002 8:18 PM PDT
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[7] -=SeTTle=- @ 63.214.98.27 | 30-Jul-02/8:09 PM | Reply
The line spacing is interesting but the poem doesn't say a whole lot.
[n/a] horus8 @ 24.126.116.54 | 21-Nov-03/7:41 PM | Reply
Semen, is often mistaken as goats milk by Catholics.
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