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Canned Laughter (Free verse) by Ketiak
The jest runs dry. Can't dispute with deserts, you know? Merciless in beating brows. Forced sweat, cold in clenching palm upon palm, constricting passages. Knees hit floor and it drains, resolve seeps into earth and fertilises seed of mirth. Waiting for a tree takes forever though.

Down the ladder: Deck's Tavern

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.3
Weighted score: 5.15
Overall Rank: 5217
Posted: July 9, 2002 7:47 PM PDT; Last modified: July 9, 2002 7:47 PM PDT
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[4] Redfin @ 66.168.139.251 | 9-Jul-02/8:13 PM | Reply
confusing
[7] nentwined @ 66.92.183.34 | 15-Jul-02/4:20 PM | Reply
interesting. odd.
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