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Summer Haiku (Haiku) by waltfreakinwhitman Hot enough for you?
It's not the temp'rature: it's
The humidity
Up the ladder:
Impermanence
Down the ladder:
Johnny Nasty
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Posted: July 12, 2002 7:55 AM PDT; Last modified: July 30, 2002 10:46 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.5555553 Overall Rank: 12658 Comments:
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12-Jul-02/8:17 AM
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temp'rature :-)
great note on a common misconception
temp'rature; I agree. :) very nice use of the form, though. :)
I thaught Haiku was 17 syllables. I counted 18.Please correct me if I'm wrong.
rod: a stick or bundle of twigs used to punish a person: slang, hand gun. moisture. slip. lunchtimed
Just like poison in a vial, this poem is very vile
That's cheating! >M#
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