poemranker ::20 most recent comments by Edna Sweetlove (161-180)

Comments byEdna Sweetlove, 161–180 back. Include replies

on Pump the Guns by oddgreenout 18 Oct 2006, 1:09 PM
tripe
on some deleted poem 27 Oct 2006, 4:27 PM
Very amusing. I loved the negroid bit.
on Confession of a troubled man by Hostileintent 11 Oct 2006, 5:12 PM
If you like doggerel, this is the one 4 U.
on The Grand Adjustment by horus8 11 Oct 2006, 5:15 PM
Long-winded overbearing pseudo-illiterate TWADDLE
on Waiting for the Doctor by GAC 18 Oct 2006, 1:01 PM
Brilliant rhyme scheme. 0/10 and count yourself lucky I'm feeling generous.
on Dancing on Glass by thepinkbunnyofdoom 27 Oct 2006, 4:29 PM
A bit of punctuation would have done no harm. But it's OK I suppose. Noy exactly profound that last line, is it?
on snot by fattony 18 Oct 2006, 1:08 PM
This showed considerable promise until that 4th line.

I suggest the last line should read:

"in the matted nose hairs i clipped so short"

And you spell nostril with an "i", dearie.
on PURPLE COWS by GAC 18 Oct 2006, 12:58 PM
About as funny as the last outbreak of the Black Death.
on Let's Do a Test by GAC 18 Oct 2006, 1:01 PM
not so gooding? You must have been desperate for a rhyme, dearie. 0/10 again.
Howlingly funny! I love this!
on Young Dead Flesh by Harry Hunt 18 Oct 2006, 1:05 PM
Quite amusing
But confusing
on Left the key in dream den's door by capachijim 17 Oct 2006, 6:54 AM
Not impressed; clumsy wording and a limp punchline. Could have been worse. Could have been illiterate!
on Lady Bradbury’s Excursion by Dovina 17 Oct 2006, 6:55 AM
Doughnut, dear. "Donut" is the brand name.
on Crappy by drnick 17 Oct 2006, 6:57 AM
Puerile. Unamusing. Not witty. Not clever. Badly punctuated. And those are some of the better aspects.
ISRAEL
Land of broken promises
Land stolen from the Palestians
Land of liars, crooks and murderers
Land supported by the Yanks
Land hopefully to disappear from the map
This poem has been posted twice. This copy is just as applalling as the first posting.

Sickening.

Israel is a rogue usurping state, hated by all except the Americans.
on One Nation Under God by GAC 18 Oct 2006, 12:57 PM
This is truly, sickeningly, repellently awful. One nation under God? Are you crazy? America is a racial mish-mash, a mixture of demented bible-thumping creationist Christians, aggressive psychopathic ill-educated redneck patriots and sentimental sloppy hypocrites. And those are the better Americans!
on Fifty if Nifty by GAC 18 Oct 2006, 1:00 PM
This will make 'em roll in the aisles down at your local tabernacle.
on Emotionally Unavailable by horus8 11 Oct 2006, 5:14 PM
pretentious - what a surprise!
on Cassius by helenwales 11 Oct 2006, 5:16 PM
Yes I like sex with pussies 2.