| Re: a fresh start by *.*ReAdY To SnAp.*. |
23-Sep-06/7:12 PM |
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| Re: Shadows In Your Eyes by PoeticJustice |
23-Sep-06/7:13 PM |
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| Re: Soup Can by oneglove |
23-Sep-06/7:13 PM |
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| Re: Farmhouse, Southern France (storm on arrival) by Ranger |
23-Sep-06/7:14 PM |
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I fell asleep after stanza #1.
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| Re: when enough is too much by elderking |
23-Sep-06/7:15 PM |
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Have you heard of capital letters?
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| Re: Weather poem part 6: idols by nypoet22 |
23-Sep-06/7:15 PM |
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If this is poetry, I'm a Chinaman.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
23-Sep-06/7:16 PM |
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| Re: if really its me by Landon2 |
23-Sep-06/7:16 PM |
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
23-Sep-06/7:18 PM |
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Hmm, not exactly fab is it?
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| Re: In the hollow (rough) by ecargo |
23-Sep-06/7:19 PM |
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What sort of word is "pricker", sweetie? The rest shows promise.
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| Re: I Have, Because I Am by flock |
23-Sep-06/7:20 PM |
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Very funny; but deadly boring.
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| Re: Rain by flock |
23-Sep-06/7:20 PM |
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| Re: SLIM JIM by PodPoet |
23-Sep-06/7:21 PM |
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Illiterate and unamusing. I have read better things in a fortune "cookie".
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
24-Sep-06/10:29 AM |
Having just read your lippy comment on a piece I wrote I thought I'd come and see what you write yourself.
Well, well, well. It was even worse than I thought.
The word which first springs to mind is "pretentious", the second word is "ungrammatical" and the third word is "tripe".
You will be happy to know I shall not bother read anything you write again.
You appear to be labouring under the delusion that, to write poetry, you scribble a couple of sentences (if they can be called that as some are bereft of verbs) of dodgy semi-comprehensible illiterate prose and then you break it up into odd little lines. You are wrong.
2/10 for effort.
Since I am of a generous nature.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
24-Sep-06/10:31 AM |
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Oh dear. I shouldn't have bothered.
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| Re: The Mikado's Poetic List by Engelbert Humpalot |
25-Sep-06/1:17 PM |
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Very clever. Well done Engy!
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| Re: Grab Out For J. Christ! by Sing4Jesus! |
7-Oct-06/9:07 AM |
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Totally staggering! I don;t know whether to give it a 10 or a 0 - such a dreadful piece of writing is eithe genius or utter shite. Please let me know which at edna_sweetlove@yahoo.co.uk !!!!!!!!
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| Re: May Sinners Rot In Fucking Hell! by Sing4Jesus! |
7-Oct-06/9:09 AM |
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Another staggering, stuttering, mentally defective write! I love you, baby!
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| Re: Street Preacher by Dovina |
7-Oct-06/9:10 AM |
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| Re: Peter by Wakeboarder20 |
7-Oct-06/9:11 AM |
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That Peter was a total asshole. Why would anyone be interested in these jew fairy stories?
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