on Shadows In Your Eyes by PoeticJustice
23 Sep 2006, 7:13 PM
dreary doggerel.
on a fresh start by *.*ReAdY To SnAp.*.
23 Sep 2006, 7:12 PM
boring and illiterate
on Farmhouse, Southern France (storm on arrival) by Ranger
23 Sep 2006, 7:14 PM
I fell asleep after stanza #1.
on when enough is too much by elderking
23 Sep 2006, 7:15 PM
Have you heard of capital letters?
on Weather poem part 6: idols by nypoet22
23 Sep 2006, 7:15 PM
If this is poetry, I'm a Chinaman.
on some deleted poem
23 Sep 2006, 7:16 PM
Inconsequential.
on if really its me by Landon2
23 Sep 2006, 7:16 PM
Illiterate garbage.
on some deleted poem
23 Sep 2006, 7:18 PM
Hmm, not exactly fab is it?
on In the hollow (rough) by ecargo
23 Sep 2006, 7:19 PM
What sort of word is "pricker", sweetie? The rest shows promise.
on some deleted poem
24 Sep 2006, 10:29 AM
Having just read your lippy comment on a piece I wrote I thought I'd come and see what you write yourself.
Well, well, well. It was even worse than I thought.
The word which first springs to mind is "pretentious", the second word is "ungrammatical" and the third word is "tripe".
You will be happy to know I shall not bother read anything you write again.
You appear to be labouring under the delusion that, to write poetry, you scribble a couple of sentences (if they can be called that as some are bereft of verbs) of dodgy semi-comprehensible illiterate prose and then you break it up into odd little lines. You are wrong.
2/10 for effort.
Since I am of a generous nature.
Well, well, well. It was even worse than I thought.
The word which first springs to mind is "pretentious", the second word is "ungrammatical" and the third word is "tripe".
You will be happy to know I shall not bother read anything you write again.
You appear to be labouring under the delusion that, to write poetry, you scribble a couple of sentences (if they can be called that as some are bereft of verbs) of dodgy semi-comprehensible illiterate prose and then you break it up into odd little lines. You are wrong.
2/10 for effort.
Since I am of a generous nature.
on some deleted poem
24 Sep 2006, 10:31 AM
Oh dear. I shouldn't have bothered.
on I Have, Because I Am by flock
23 Sep 2006, 7:20 PM
Very funny; but deadly boring.
on The Mikado's Poetic List by Engelbert Humpalot
25 Sep 2006, 1:17 PM
Very clever. Well done Engy!
on Grab Out For J. Christ! by Sing4Jesus!
7 Oct 2006, 9:07 AM
Totally staggering! I don;t know whether to give it a 10 or a 0 - such a dreadful piece of writing is eithe genius or utter shite. Please let me know which at edna_sweetlove@yahoo.co.uk !!!!!!!!
on May Sinners Rot In Fucking Hell! by Sing4Jesus!
7 Oct 2006, 9:09 AM
Another staggering, stuttering, mentally defective write! I love you, baby!
on Street Preacher by Dovina
7 Oct 2006, 9:10 AM
boring.
on Peter by Wakeboarder20
7 Oct 2006, 9:11 AM
That Peter was a total asshole. Why would anyone be interested in these jew fairy stories?