Free verse № 146945
Street Preacher
He shouts like the others,
ignores the same sneers.
I reject him at first,
then stop and turn back
with a taste in my head
of new wine and salt:
âThis evil you see all around you,â he saysâ
âdead babies, cancer, and suchâ
God planted its seed at the start,
then let it continue
in spite of Himself,
as if blind, with
scant little action
to stop it.
âTo make matters worse,
when I throw up a âWhy?â
He seldom obliges
an answer at all.
âSo point up a finger
if it makes you upset.
Heâs up there alright,
and joins your disgust.
âBut rather than end it,
He took it one day,
took evil upon Him,
a cross and a grave,
said, âTrust Me and you
can conquer it too.â
âComplain if you want,
but remember too
that whatever evil you do,
that too has been nailed,
forgiven, and lost.â
It was dark as I left him,
not light as before,
but a lingering taste
as of supper and wine.
17 comments
The appealing thing about this street preacher is that he does not look like all the others. He has a unique and honest-sounding take on the Gospel. Maybe the same kind of take Jesus had.
I hope this gospel is not one of the ones written after Jesus' death, otherwise his take on it may be tricky to know. Haven't we had the God-evil discussion before? I know I've talked with ALChemy and Amanda about it at some point.
the last stanza to me seems unnecessary, trying to spell out details of an emotion that could easily be implied simply by reversing the order of "nailed and forgiven." likewise the first stanza weakens the poem, makes it prosaic by introducing the subject in a story format rather than just jumping right in and adding any necessary details of the setting within the body of the text.
let the words do a little of the work - there are too many here, methinks.
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