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Street Preacher (Free verse) by Dovina
He shouts like the others,
ignores the same sneers.
I reject him at first,
then stop and turn back
with a taste in my head
of new wine and salt:
âThis evil you see all around you,â he saysâ
âdead babies, cancer, and suchâ
God planted its seed at the start,
then let it continue
in spite of Himself,
as if blind, with
scant little action
to stop it.
âTo make matters worse,
when I throw up a âWhy?â
He seldom obliges
an answer at all.
âSo point up a finger
if it makes you upset.
Heâs up there alright,
and joins your disgust.
âBut rather than end it,
He took it one day,
took evil upon Him,
a cross and a grave,
said, âTrust Me and you
can conquer it too.â
âComplain if you want,
but remember too
that whatever evil you do,
that too has been nailed,
forgiven, and lost.â
It was dark as I left him,
not light as before,
but a lingering taste
as of supper and wine.
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Arithmetic Mean: 3.142857
Weighted score: 4.5005374
Overall Rank: 12805
Posted: October 2, 2006 11:25 AM PDT; Last modified: October 4, 2006 9:20 AM PDT
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The appealing thing about this street preacher is that he does not look like all the others. He has a unique and honest-sounding take on the Gospel. Maybe the same kind of take Jesus had.
I hope this gospel is not one of the ones written after Jesus' death, otherwise his take on it may be tricky to know. Haven't we had the God-evil discussion before? I know I've talked with ALChemy and Amanda about it at some point.