| Re: California triolets by zodiac |
10-Dec-06/11:10 AM |
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I thought it said "California toilets" Sorry. It would have been better thus.
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| Re: California triolets by zodiac |
10-Dec-06/11:10 AM |
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I thought it said "California toilets" Sorry. It would have been better thus.
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| Re: Ode to the Bun by Stephen Robins |
10-Dec-06/11:12 AM |
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I think you will find there are three Ts in twattish.
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| Re: War Begins on Tuesday by Nicholas Jones |
10-Dec-06/11:14 AM |
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| Re: Uncontrolled scribblings one luch break by Nicholas Jones |
10-Dec-06/11:15 AM |
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Pretentious and ill-spelled.
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| Re: On returning to a town where I used to live by Nicholas Jones |
10-Dec-06/11:15 AM |
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If this is poetry I am a Chinaman
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15-Jan-07/11:15 AM |
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This is really not very good, but I have come to expect nothing less from you, dearie. I shall be generous in my marking and give it 1/10.
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| Re: Push, Wipe, Flush by Dr Toilet |
16-Jan-07/4:45 AM |
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It is not often one comes across such a beautiful piece of versification as this one. Thank fuck.
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| Re: Dr Toilet's Tidal Poem by Dr Toilet |
16-Jan-07/4:46 AM |
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Ah yes indeedy, I recognise the odour so well; it is particularly strong as it arises from the previous commentator's poetry.
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| Re: Leap! by Jill Stockinger |
16-Jan-07/4:49 AM |
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Nearly as badly written as something by Rockmage. In short, terrible.
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| Re: My daughter found at the age of 28 by Jill Stockinger |
16-Jan-07/4:50 AM |
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I would just love to be say how great this is. But that would be a lie. It hits rock bottom in all senses except pretentiousness.
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| Re: Smiling by Jill Stockinger |
16-Jan-07/4:52 AM |
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Suspiciously familiar. A richly deserved zero.
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16-Jan-07/4:53 AM |
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Put this zero score into your stocking, dear.
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| Re: good bye. by nentwined |
16-Jan-07/11:53 AM |
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Your spelling and poetic ability are on a par with shuushit's. This is more of a weeping sore than a pimple.
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| Re: Come off with me Carly back into the city by zodiac |
16-Jan-07/11:54 AM |
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| Re: A Flower for Monet by Shuushin |
16-Jan-07/12:01 PM |
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Much better than usual. Almost interesting in fact. Still lacking in humour though.
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| Re: Ballad for a bad Irish accent by zodiac |
16-Jan-07/12:03 PM |
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What the flying fuck is "a seventy-cent hand shandy" ? Or am I missing something just to poetic for words? I assume "Snorkelling Jenny" (double LL please) is a Brechtian reference
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16-Jan-07/12:04 PM |
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Incredible funny. Except you don't know it.
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| Re: Brackish by <~> |
16-Jan-07/12:04 PM |
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I like your pen-name. It's the best thing about this twaddle.
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16-Jan-07/12:05 PM |
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