on some deleted poem
16 Jan 2007, 4:53 AM
Put this zero score into your stocking, dear.
on California triolets by zodiac
10 Dec 2006, 11:10 AM
I thought it said "California toilets" Sorry. It would have been better thus.
on War Begins on Tuesday by Nicholas Jones
10 Dec 2006, 11:14 AM
Not very good.
on Uncontrolled scribblings one luch break by Nicholas Jones
10 Dec 2006, 11:15 AM
Pretentious and ill-spelled.
on On returning to a town where I used to live by Nicholas Jones
10 Dec 2006, 11:15 AM
If this is poetry I am a Chinaman
on California triolets by zodiac
10 Dec 2006, 11:10 AM
I thought it said "California toilets" Sorry. It would have been better thus.
on Ode to the Bun by Stephen Robins
10 Dec 2006, 11:12 AM
I think you will find there are three Ts in twattish.
on some deleted poem
15 Jan 2007, 11:15 AM
This is really not very good, but I have come to expect nothing less from you, dearie. I shall be generous in my marking and give it 1/10.
on Dr Toilet's Tidal Poem by Dr Toilet
16 Jan 2007, 4:46 AM
Ah yes indeedy, I recognise the odour so well; it is particularly strong as it arises from the previous commentator's poetry.
on Leap! by Jill Stockinger
16 Jan 2007, 4:49 AM
Nearly as badly written as something by Rockmage. In short, terrible.
on My daughter found at the age of 28 by Jill Stockinger
16 Jan 2007, 4:50 AM
I would just love to be say how great this is. But that would be a lie. It hits rock bottom in all senses except pretentiousness.
on Smiling by Jill Stockinger
16 Jan 2007, 4:52 AM
Suspiciously familiar. A richly deserved zero.
on Push, Wipe, Flush by Dr Toilet
16 Jan 2007, 4:45 AM
It is not often one comes across such a beautiful piece of versification as this one. Thank fuck.
on A Flower for Monet by Shuushin
16 Jan 2007, 12:01 PM
Much better than usual. Almost interesting in fact. Still lacking in humour though.
on Come off with me Carly back into the city by zodiac
16 Jan 2007, 11:54 AM
How beat-y. 1/10
on Ballad for a bad Irish accent by zodiac
16 Jan 2007, 12:03 PM
What the flying fuck is "a seventy-cent hand shandy" ? Or am I missing something just to poetic for words? I assume "Snorkelling Jenny" (double LL please) is a Brechtian reference
on some deleted poem
16 Jan 2007, 12:04 PM
Incredible funny. Except you don't know it.
on some deleted poem
16 Jan 2007, 12:05 PM
Wordy.