Re: AIDS in a van by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	14-May-06/2:53 AM
About as funny as 9/11. But less original.
Re: Beard my Homemade Negro Jesus (Improved! With AIDS!) by Everyone	14-May-06/2:55 AM
Too long and drawn out. I got bored by the 4th or 5th stanza. A couple of decent jokes in it though.
Re: The Ballad of Fraser Allonby Q.C., Barrister-At-Law by wFraser Allonby Q.C.w	14-May-06/2:56 AM
OK I suppose. The final word of the last line of the penultimate stanza would be funnier if it were "bitches".
Re: Rock Bottom by dana071287	14-May-06/3:02 AM
Not excatly what you'd call either original or clever.
Re: My Barber Cut My Hair Too Long by D. $ Fontera	14-May-06/3:05 AM
Random thoughts from a creative mind. But not much good.
Re: youth in asia by suckmychucks	14-May-06/3:06 AM
Unfunny. Unclever. And it's not a limerick. Dreadful in short.
Re: A Prayer For God's Soldiers As They Kill For Him by Edna Sweetlove	14-May-06/2:40 PM
Anal is next to godliness.
regarding some deleted poem...	14-May-06/2:41 PM
Total worthless bollocks.
regarding some deleted poem...	14-May-06/2:42 PM
I have found better poems in the local public lavvy.
Re: Ah! That Love Would'st Lead Me by EggbertShootsFire	15-May-06/8:37 AM
Line 6: "lead" should be "led". Apart from that error whivh I shall charitably assume is a typo, I liked this poem even though it's a bit derivative.
Re: grim task by lmp	15-May-06/8:42 AM
I have mixed feelings here. I loathe the Americanised spelling of meagre and sepulchre. And this alleged modernity clashed with the archaic and pseudo-poetic "ev'ry". And punctuation: if you eschew capitals I feel you could drop the commas and fullstops (or as you amusingly and coyly call them "periods").
Re: With a pithy stroke by D. $ Fontera	15-May-06/4:38 PM
This is bollocks. Your others are better (I hope)
Re: Is Dying Ugly? by D. $ Fontera	15-May-06/4:39 PM
Not my taste, babe.
regarding some deleted poem...	15-May-06/4:41 PM
Not exactly ground-breaking is it, dear?
Re: Old Friends by sliver	15-May-06/4:43 PM
A bit dull.
Re: One Moment to the Other (v3) by nentwined	15-May-06/4:44 PM
pretentious.
Re: Divorcing Tennessee by Dovina	15-May-06/4:45 PM
Not good. Parochial rubbish in fact.
regarding some deleted poem...	15-May-06/4:47 PM
Otiose, pretentious, wordy, jumped up crap.
Re: Room 34 Ashford Hospital by Caducus	15-May-06/4:48 PM
Very cunty funny.
Re: I'M by freakything	15-May-06/4:49 PM
awful.