on AIDS in a van by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
14 May 2006, 2:53 AM
About as funny as 9/11. But less original.
on Rock Bottom by dana071287
14 May 2006, 3:02 AM
Not excatly what you'd call either original or clever.
on My Barber Cut My Hair Too Long by D. $ Fontera
14 May 2006, 3:05 AM
Random thoughts from a creative mind. But not much good.
on youth in asia by suckmychucks
14 May 2006, 3:06 AM
Unfunny. Unclever. And it's not a limerick. Dreadful in short.
on Beard my Homemade Negro Jesus (Improved! With AIDS!) by Everyone
14 May 2006, 2:55 AM
Too long and drawn out. I got bored by the 4th or 5th stanza. A couple of decent jokes in it though.
on The Ballad of Fraser Allonby Q.C., Barrister-At-Law by wFraser Allonby Q.C.w
14 May 2006, 2:56 AM
OK I suppose. The final word of the last line of the penultimate stanza would be funnier if it were "bitches".
on Ah! That Love Would'st Lead Me by EggbertShootsFire
15 May 2006, 8:37 AM
Line 6: "lead" should be "led". Apart from that error whivh I shall charitably assume is a typo, I liked this poem even though it's a bit derivative.
I have mixed feelings here. I loathe the Americanised spelling of meagre and sepulchre. And this alleged modernity clashed with the archaic and pseudo-poetic "ev'ry". And punctuation: if you eschew capitals I feel you could drop the commas and fullstops (or as you amusingly and coyly call them "periods").
on some deleted poem
14 May 2006, 2:41 PM
Total worthless bollocks.
on some deleted poem
14 May 2006, 2:42 PM
I have found better poems in the local public lavvy.
on A Prayer For God's Soldiers As They Kill For Him by Edna Sweetlove
14 May 2006, 2:40 PM
Anal is next to godliness.
on With a pithy stroke by D. $ Fontera
15 May 2006, 4:38 PM
This is bollocks. Your others are better (I hope)
on Is Dying Ugly? by D. $ Fontera
15 May 2006, 4:39 PM
Not my taste, babe.
on some deleted poem
15 May 2006, 4:41 PM
Not exactly ground-breaking is it, dear?
on Old Friends by sliver
15 May 2006, 4:43 PM
A bit dull.
on One Moment to the Other (v3) by nentwined
15 May 2006, 4:44 PM
pretentious.
on Divorcing Tennessee by Dovina
15 May 2006, 4:45 PM
Not good. Parochial rubbish in fact.
on some deleted poem
15 May 2006, 4:47 PM
Otiose, pretentious, wordy, jumped up crap.
on Room 34 Ashford Hospital by Caducus
15 May 2006, 4:48 PM
Very cunty funny.
on I'M by freakything
15 May 2006, 4:49 PM
awful.