poemranker ::20 most recent comments by Edna Sweetlove (501-520)

Comments byEdna Sweetlove, 501–520 back. Include replies

on some deleted poem 15 May 2006, 4:57 PM
Puerile.
Poor.
on Perfect place by gothiclovepoetiss 15 May 2006, 4:58 PM
Not a limerick.
on The Grandfather Suite by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 15 May 2006, 4:58 PM
Not very funny.
Pitiful. Pathetic. Abysmal.
on Wise Clogg! by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 15 May 2006, 5:01 PM
Silly rubbish.
inconsequentially boring.
on Pain by camperdfl 15 May 2006, 5:02 PM
How is this a limerick? Are you potty?
on Quadroons by Shardik 15 May 2006, 4:52 PM
knobs or nobs? Oh dear. 1/10
on The blue light special. by Jeremi B. Handrinos 15 May 2006, 5:01 PM
Unintelligible.
on some deleted poem 15 May 2006, 4:59 PM
The only funny limerick I have read in the past 20. I love spunk.
Illiterate. Not limericks. Pathetic.
on some deleted poem 15 May 2006, 4:57 PM
Painfully unamusing and amateurish. Soup does not rhyme with troops. Bad metre.
on AIDS in a nurse by <{Baba^Yaga}> 15 May 2006, 4:54 PM
Raped/plate/stapled do NOT rhyme. You must have the aural equivalent of dyslexia.
on some deleted poem 15 May 2006, 5:00 PM
You need some capital letters here. I'd have marked higher with them.
Bad rhyming, unamusing, this has everything. I wish I could score it minus.
on WhyI laugh with Moses. by <{Baba^Yaga}> 15 May 2006, 4:56 PM
Studded with illiteracy; overlong; but at least a teeeeeeeeny bit amusing. Splling dreadful.
on The Prodigal Daughter by Dovina 15 May 2006, 4:49 PM
You could do with some punctuation.
on some deleted poem 15 May 2006, 4:50 PM
Utterly unfunny.
on My pimp's ceiling fan by Shardik 15 May 2006, 4:51 PM
Appallingly unamusing and badly rhymed too.