on Generation Next, Fuck you(The Fake Out) by thepinkbunnyofdoom
19 May 2006, 4:49 AM
OK I suppose.
on Pawn by Blindpoetry
20 May 2006, 4:45 PM
Truly dreadful. And your spelling isn't much good either.
on The Blood by Blindpoetry
20 May 2006, 4:44 PM
Appalling.
on ...on the Benefits of Being Ugly by Goad
15 May 2006, 5:17 PM
Good. Original rhyming asnd scansion. talented.
on The Waves by Rilke4ClosetLesbians
20 May 2006, 4:39 PM
How true. How true.
on Supposition Now by MacFrantic
16 May 2006, 12:37 PM
Pretentious I feel. Tryst is mis-spelled too.
on Tree of Life by ALChemy
17 May 2006, 7:37 AM
Odd. Are you saying the leaves fly to warm nests? That's a bit esoteric.
on Love Is In The Air by Blindpoetry
20 May 2006, 4:40 PM
You could do with a few apostrophes in the right places.
on Perversions by razorgrin
15 May 2006, 5:16 PM
I give up.this is rubbish.
on The Prodigal Daughter by Dovina
19 May 2006, 4:52 AM
Groveling? Groveling? You mean, to rhyme with "revealing" and "ceiling" ?
on Being Called Dave by ?-Dave_Mysterious-?
15 May 2006, 5:17 PM
Dave says this stinks.
on Perversions 5: Kink vs. Mothra by razorgrin
15 May 2006, 5:16 PM
Not good. Where were you when the humour tablets were handed out?
on some deleted poem
15 May 2006, 5:18 PM
illiterate - ungrammatical - unamusing - not a limerick - well done - not .
on A Different Point of View by Blindpoetry
20 May 2006, 4:44 PM
The bit about the nail in the foot is very funny and deserves 10/10; but the rest is pretty dire.
on Always by freakything
16 May 2006, 12:36 PM
Quite nicely worded but more like prose broken up into arbitrary lines. Over-punctuated, I feel, with an excess of commas.
on Tin Can Longings by phoenixxx
16 May 2006, 5:28 AM
Nostalhic but spoiled by using the repulsive non-word "yeah". I'd have given it 8/10, but with 2 "yeahs" there is a price to be paid: 2/10.
on How I fuck Freud off in the shower by horus8
20 May 2006, 4:43 PM
This is quite funny. I would have given it 9/10 if it had not been for the dreadful punctuation and grammar. What a pity humour is wrecked by educational ignorance. Thus: 3/10 instead, but try harder.
on "My Love" by wickedemon4
16 May 2006, 5:26 AM
Very funny. I love bonfire being 2 words. Hard to know if this is intentionally bad, if so 10/10. But I think you don't know any better, so 0/10. Keep up the funny work as I am smiling happily at this.