Re: Charles by neurula	15-May-06/5:15 PM
What is the joke, dear?
Re: Perversions 5: Kink vs. Mothra by razorgrin	15-May-06/5:16 PM
Not good. Where were you when the humour tablets were handed out?
Re: Perversions by razorgrin	15-May-06/5:16 PM
I give up.this is rubbish.
Re: Being Called Dave by ?-Dave_Mysterious-?	15-May-06/5:17 PM
Dave says this stinks.
Re: ...on the Benefits of Being Ugly by Goad	15-May-06/5:17 PM
Good. Original rhyming asnd scansion. talented.
regarding some deleted poem...	15-May-06/5:18 PM
illiterate - ungrammatical - unamusing - not a limerick - well done - not .
Re: "My Love" by wickedemon4	16-May-06/5:26 AM
Very funny. I love bonfire being 2 words. Hard to know if this is intentionally bad, if so 10/10. But I think you don't know any better, so 0/10. Keep up the funny work as I am smiling happily at this.
Re: Tin Can Longings by phoenixxx	16-May-06/5:28 AM
Nostalhic but spoiled by using the repulsive non-word "yeah". I'd have given it 8/10, but with 2 "yeahs" there is a price to be paid: 2/10.
Re: Mid-July by Ranger	16-May-06/5:31 AM
Goes on a bit. A bit over-written ("Oh Death!....) Not bad though.
Re: Always by freakything	16-May-06/12:36 PM
Quite nicely worded but more like prose broken up into arbitrary lines. Over-punctuated, I feel, with an excess of commas.
Re: Supposition Now by MacFrantic	16-May-06/12:37 PM
Pretentious I feel. Tryst is mis-spelled too.
Re: Tree of Life by ALChemy	17-May-06/7:37 AM
Odd. Are you saying the leaves fly to warm nests? That's a bit esoteric.
Re: Generation Next, Fuck you(The Fake Out) by thepinkbunnyofdoom	19-May-06/4:49 AM
OK I suppose.
Re: The Prodigal Daughter by Dovina	19-May-06/4:52 AM
Groveling? Groveling? You mean, to rhyme with "revealing" and "ceiling" ?
Re: The Waves by Rilke4ClosetLesbians	20-May-06/4:39 PM
How true. How true.
Re: Love Is In The Air by Blindpoetry	20-May-06/4:40 PM
You could do with a few apostrophes in the right places.
Re: How I fuck Freud off in the shower by horus8	20-May-06/4:43 PM
This is quite funny. I would have given it 9/10 if it had not been for the dreadful punctuation and grammar. What a pity humour is wrecked by educational ignorance. Thus: 3/10 instead, but try harder.
Re: A Different Point of View by Blindpoetry	20-May-06/4:44 PM
The bit about the nail in the foot is very funny and deserves 10/10; but the rest is pretty dire.
Re: The Blood by Blindpoetry	20-May-06/4:44 PM
Appalling.
Re: Pawn by Blindpoetry	20-May-06/4:45 PM
Truly dreadful. And your spelling isn't much good either.