Re: a comment on Iterated Fuck by nentwined	4-Jun-03/3:59 PM
No. You had it on repeat.
Re: a comment on Iterated Fuck by nentwined	4-Jun-03/2:59 PM
whatever you do, i'd leave in the "hand grasps the penis" bit and the banging and banging and bonking and bonking and banging and bonking and banging and banging and banging and baaaaaaarrrgghhh!!! Actually that's not a bad idea. You might want to throw in an "AAAAAAAAAARRGGHHHH!" somewhere. Instead of CUM.
Re: a comment on Iterated Fuck by nentwined	4-Jun-03/2:53 PM
but was it erotic? that's the important thing...
Re: Karma by blankel	4-Jun-03/1:58 PM
Splendid!
Re: a comment on Have You Ever Been In Love? by Katie	4-Jun-03/1:28 PM
Yes... yes, what a chilling, true way of putting it: the ice covering his black heart. Simply beautiful.
Re: a comment on AIDS in a van by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	4-Jun-03/1:09 PM
This piece of unauthorised AIDS Bonanza! fanfic is one of the worst limericks I've ever read. The first line is the only good part; after that it fails to rhyme, scan, or make any sense whatsoever. Here is my version: There once was some AIDS in a crayon, Which I scribbled all over a Mayan. They cremated his body, But the admin was shoddy: His ashes were sealed in a gay urn!!!!!!
Re: Iterated Fuck by nentwined	4-Jun-03/12:45 PM
After discovering the audiostatic recordings of poemes on your website, I was disappointed to find that 'Iterated Fuck' was not among them. How dearly I would love to hear this read out in nentwined's sumptuous, erotic tones! Alas, I could not wait. Here is a recording I have made which represents, I believe, what it would sound like. http://darkangel.illfuckinghostit.com/bumwagon.html
Re: E tu trabajo el prostitute by <{Baba^Yaga}>	4-Jun-03/12:36 PM
"Making me who I am, not what I am liable to do." Surely the fact that you have written this poeme contradicts the idea that your magical experiences are so ineffable as to not affect your behaviour.
Re: a comment on Hunting God by Shardik	4-Jun-03/10:02 AM
my eyes are wet with the wet tears of sadness how can I live without you? when we first met my heart filled with gladness but you were an goldfish so I crushed you (into fertiliser)
Re: a comment on Hunting God by Shardik	4-Jun-03/9:51 AM
do they make it in a secret underwater factory lol asl?
Re: 11th September (a senyru) by scitz	4-Jun-03/9:47 AM
quite vivid but again a little too short.
Re: Dying In Silk (senryu) by scitz	4-Jun-03/9:45 AM
a bit short
Re: a comment on Have You Ever Been In Love? by Katie	4-Jun-03/6:02 AM
horus8, you can be so mean. Sometimes I worry that you might be driving people away from the site. I pray to Jesu that this is not so.
Re: a comment on nothing is by w~* ATHENA *~w	3-Jun-03/2:27 PM
What is it plagiarised from? Is it the negation of the Morbid Angel song "Nothing is not"?
Re: a comment on To those who'd share their heartfelt feelings with the world by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	3-Jun-03/2:01 PM
No-one gives a shit about whether you think people give a shit about what I give a shit about. Your poems are shit and they are shit. And banging and banging and banging and bonking and bonkping -- and CUM.
Re: a comment on To those who'd share their heartfelt feelings with the world by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	3-Jun-03/9:44 AM
That's right.
Re: a comment on Interview with a Steven King by Bachus	3-Jun-03/9:09 AM
Don't besmirch the good name of Grandfather by associating it with horus8's unauthorized Grandfather fanfic.
Re: Iterated Fuck by nentwined	2-Jun-03/4:40 PM
Whatever erotic energy you might have built up in the second verse is utterly destroyed by the fact that the last word is "CUM".
Re: you will feel by nentwined	2-Jun-03/4:34 PM
Razor scars, how powerful and sublime.
Re: a comment on Mississipi Murder by scitz	2-Jun-03/2:43 PM
You do realise that you are now on about ten squillion FBI suspect lists just for having visited that site? And I'll have you know that while Martin Luther King had rather disgusting beliefs concerning interracial marriage and ethnic rights, he was a loving and caring communist, and his reputation as a sexual pervert was beyond reproach!