Re: a comment on The Kings of Paradise by Spindle |
9-Apr-04/5:38 AM |
Are you that proud of smoking a marijuana that you have to soil yourself in public like this?
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Re: a comment on The Kings of Paradise by Spindle |
8-Apr-04/5:12 AM |
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Re: a comment on Shampoo and Condition by Luzr |
7-Apr-04/1:07 PM |
Wacky numbers: beloved crutch of dullards everywhere.
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Re: a comment on Shampoo and Condition by Luzr |
7-Apr-04/11:51 AM |
Yeah, but you're still about 12. Wait until you get older.
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Re: A Quick Lick Of Yellow by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
6-Apr-04/2:20 PM |
A shockingly brown autoclam. -10-
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Re: Alone by Deluxotron |
6-Apr-04/5:24 AM |
You sound like a real catch!!
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Re: a comment on Alive within the sound of life by Prince of Void |
6-Apr-04/3:20 AM |
I once tried to 'incest' in Microsoft Word, but the fucking paperclip tipped off the feds before I had even achieved penetration.
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Re: Mr. Jawharp Man by Sidekickboy |
5-Apr-04/11:37 AM |
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Re: a comment on Dreams and Galaxies by embersandenvelopes |
5-Apr-04/3:35 AM |
Hey I just wanna say you're right about the "A". I replaced it with an "a" and was immediately forced to give this piece a -0-.
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Re: Hologram glasses by zodiac |
4-Apr-04/4:37 PM |
If Ray Bradbury were to somehow transmute himself into a guff, this poeme would be the name of the guff. And that name is Jesu.
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Re: a comment on Daddy's Little Girl by daveslady |
4-Apr-04/5:01 AM |
Don't be such a simpleminded boob. My poemes are unbelievable guff, just like all poetry. However, the real guff is your tedious amateur psychology. No, wait, the real guff is all poetry. Thanks!
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Re: Hologram glasses by zodiac |
3-Apr-04/3:19 PM |
Why is the entire poeme indented?
This doesn't really achieve the vague air of guffing claptrap that wheezes out of all good poetry. -2-
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Re: a comment on Daddy's Little Girl by daveslady |
3-Apr-04/3:09 PM |
Somebody who actually was stronger wouldn't need to tell themselves they were stronger. Telling yourself you're stronger is like telling yourself you can achieve anything if you set your heart on it: mealy-mouthed blubbering fiddle-faddle for spineless duncecombes to cling onto instead of facing the fact that the world isn't a special magical secret garden of faeyrieyes and smiling toadstools where everyone loves everyone else and they all write each other gushing friendship notes on Anne Geddes note-paper. Thanks!
Poeme review: Weepy prose with arbitrary line breaks =/= poetry.
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Re: a comment on To those who'd share their heartfelt feelings with the world by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
2-Apr-04/12:26 PM |
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Re: a comment on Almost One by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
2-Apr-04/11:37 AM |
A party where someone skewers her on a punt pole and sands off her feet.
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Re: a comment on Cargo pants by tre |
2-Apr-04/9:52 AM |
what do yu mean?? i hope I havne't offended you because i'm truely sorry if so :(
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Re: a comment on Shampoo and Condition by Luzr |
2-Apr-04/9:51 AM |
Perhaps you could tell me what sort of 'constant partying' you've been doing that doesn't involve a hangover. Do people's parents make you go home at 10:30? Or are you under the pathetic delusion that you can have a good time without drugs?
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Re: Cargo pants by tre |
2-Apr-04/9:27 AM |
Hi tre ^_^ I thought this was such a cool poeme! i hope you'll read some of mine n tell me what u think!!1
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Re: How does it feel? by OfaRevolutionAJD |
2-Apr-04/8:43 AM |
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Re: a comment on Watching The Rose Grow by Blindpoetry |
2-Apr-04/8:18 AM |
An electronegro swimming in negro juices
An oversized negro
A profoundly brave negro
A negro wipe
A negro caddy
A shamefully foul negro uniform
A disgustingly souped-up gentleman's moustache which opens up to reveal a negro buttock
A peephole negro
An enormous negro moustache
A negro
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