Re: Fascination by ObiWonKn	9-Jul-02/2:57 PM
Well that's certainly a unique experience! Perhaps you would like to share your experiences of other things nobody has ever experienced before? I'm sure you have some powerful things to say about unrequited love!!
Re: lurcher for lunch - for James Kelman by roy rocket	9-Jul-02/2:56 PM
I would have preferred it if you had included the word 'chin' somewhere.
Re: pinky swear by crin	9-Jul-02/2:55 PM
It's called the handbrake, my love. And to think you call yourself a car expert...
Re: My Tongue ..... and God by BadPoet	9-Jul-02/2:54 PM
O Jesu! I dare not think what would happen if you wrote erotic fiction. Delightful play-off of anatomy and religion!!!!!!!!!!
Re: Harry the Moon by Mimi & Vincent	9-Jul-02/7:58 AM
My tumor gives me great pride. Thought I do agree that monies and stati make one's blind. Great line by the way.
Re: To the Sea by timfowler	9-Jul-02/7:29 AM
While you, Sir, may hope for the breaking of tides deeper and unblessed from the salt-crust lips, I hope merely for the breaking of wind richer and unsmelt from the brown-crust cheeks. Good day.
Re: just like the jagged dagger by Angel_of_fait	9-Jul-02/4:06 AM
You know, I read this poeme and thought: I am also just like the jagged dagger "sliceing" my life away.
Re: trapoide by Angel_of_fait	9-Jul-02/3:56 AM
Beautiful..."people who shrug life, hug life and even sometimes mug life"... sheer genius. You know, people do sometimes mug life. It's an important issue which you have tackled with breathtaking clarity. Are you a pro?
Re: Through the eyes of life by Angel_of_fait	9-Jul-02/3:49 AM
Jeepers. This poeme is amazing. It really made me see through the eyes of life. Most 14 year old kids from Texas are among the most dangerously stupid individuals in the world. But you are completely different! Great job!
Re: Sonnet For a Porn Star by mikejedw	8-Jul-02/5:27 PM
Similar to one I'm working on - so I appreciate the effort you've put into this. But why does the first line have 12 syllables?
Re: Walls by razorgrin	24-Jun-02/1:29 PM
Does a stone wall stop a blind woman as surely as one who sees?
Re: Angelic Triumvirate by Sterling5583	19-Jun-02/6:44 AM
I'm just trying to help you, my child. One cannot expect to use poemeranker as a means of fuelling one's ego, lest there be weeping and gnashing of teethe. Forgive him, Lord Jesu, for he knows not what he says.
Re: Morning Glory by waltfreakinwhitman	18-Jun-02/4:55 PM
I call this your desperate attempt to be crowned King of the Worst Poeme section. I suggest you stop deliberately trying to topple AIDS in a Van from its rightful throne! AIDS in a Van is so utterly crude and tasteless that it is bound to receive more zeros than any other. At least it would if you stopped giving it 10's.
Re: Waiting for things to Happen by nentwined	16-Jun-02/5:36 PM
What is this 'toilin' you speak of? Some sort of toilet-linen? Balmilise me with it at once!
Re: How my head feels by Adriaan	16-Jun-02/5:35 PM
Don't you think "and then it stops" slows down the flow of the poem somewhat? I think what you're looking for is a sort of counter-rhythm, but frankly it fails. You fail.
Re: beauty by Adriaan	16-Jun-02/5:33 PM
I suggest that you read some poetry written in the last ten years! This is silly, silly nonsense.
Re: The Chessmaster by Sterling5583	16-Jun-02/5:32 PM
I THINK you'll find that children start out in life as a prawne! Silly, silly nonsense. I shall be contacting the FBI and bringing this so-called 'chess' to their attention at once.
Re: For Benjamin by moonUnit	14-Jun-02/12:16 PM
I think that it is surely one of the greatest tragedies of society that your brother will not play with you just because you're black.
Re: take me back home again: by Sapphire	14-Jun-02/12:07 PM
The more of your poemes I read, the more I am overcome with a sense of joy and splendour. I had no idea poetry could be so startlingly original. And so diverse as well. Keep up the good work, though I'm not sure how much more beauty my hearte can take before it is overwhelmed.
Re: Tainted by necroscope7	13-Jun-02/5:06 PM
My comments can seem harsh at times. But that's only because I am deliberately trying to insult you. I hope that this will give me great pleasure and hell, we might even learn a thing or two about self-esteem along the way.