on Through the eyes of life by Angel_of_fait
9 Jul 2002, 3:49 AM
Jeepers. This poeme is amazing. It really made me see through the eyes of life. Most 14 year old kids from Texas are among the most dangerously stupid individuals in the world. But you are completely different! Great job!
on Sonnet For a Porn Star by mikejedw
8 Jul 2002, 5:27 PM
Similar to one I'm working on - so I appreciate the effort you've put into this. But why does the first line have 12 syllables?
on Angelic Triumvirate by Sterling5583
19 Jun 2002, 6:44 AM
I'm just trying to help you, my child. One cannot expect to use poemeranker as a means of fuelling one's ego, lest there be weeping and gnashing of teethe. Forgive him, Lord Jesu, for he knows not what he says.
on Morning Glory by waltfreakinwhitman
18 Jun 2002, 4:55 PM
I call this your desperate attempt to be crowned King of the Worst Poeme section. I suggest you stop deliberately trying to topple AIDS in a Van from its rightful throne! AIDS in a Van is so utterly crude and tasteless that it is bound to receive more zeros than any other. At least it would if you stopped giving it 10's.
on Waiting for things to Happen by nentwined
16 Jun 2002, 5:36 PM
What is this 'toilin' you speak of? Some sort of toilet-linen? Balmilise me with it at once!
on How my head feels by Adriaan
16 Jun 2002, 5:35 PM
Don't you think "and then it stops" slows down the flow of the poem somewhat? I think what you're looking for is a sort of counter-rhythm, but frankly it fails. You fail.
on The Chessmaster by Sterling5583
16 Jun 2002, 5:32 PM
I THINK you'll find that children start out in life as a prawne! Silly, silly nonsense. I shall be contacting the FBI and bringing this so-called 'chess' to their attention at once.
on For Benjamin by moonUnit
14 Jun 2002, 12:16 PM
I think that it is surely one of the greatest tragedies of society that your brother will not play with you just because you're black.
on take me back home again: by Sapphire
14 Jun 2002, 12:07 PM
The more of your poemes I read, the more I am overcome with a sense of joy and splendour. I had no idea poetry could be so startlingly original. And so diverse as well. Keep up the good work, though I'm not sure how much more beauty my hearte can take before it is overwhelmed.
on Tainted by necroscope7
13 Jun 2002, 5:06 PM
My comments can seem harsh at times. But that's only because I am deliberately trying to insult you. I hope that this will give me great pleasure and hell, we might even learn a thing or two about self-esteem along the way.
on What Does it Mean to be Human by Sterling5583
13 Jun 2002, 9:05 AM
Being human means that you have the gift of shame. Humans must wear clothes, while sinful animals wander around in the nude. We also have the gift of speech, for it is blasphemous for animals to talk. Humans may dine on animals and treat them as lesser beings for animals have no morals. That is why vegetarians are foolish.
on wizard master by beakism
12 Jun 2002, 8:00 PM
There once was a poet called 'Beakism'/Who was strong once but then became weakism/For writing 'bout Elves/Filled all of his shelves/Which fell o'er, and injured his cheekism.
on Ethnic Smells by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
12 Jun 2002, 7:51 PM
Your reply chilled me to the bum. I suppose you think you're standing up for ethnic minorities by giving a token 'concerned' reply, do you? Well, I've got news for you: I'm contacting the F.B.I. And you may lay to that.
on Angelic Triumvirate by Sterling5583
12 Jun 2002, 2:23 AM
Those angels were surely sent to torment us all! O' beloved Jesu! I beg of you! Remove the pen from this tyrant's sinful grasp!
on Lowest Common Currency by unknown
12 Jun 2002, 1:44 AM
This poeme raises many issues.
on wizard master by beakism
7 Jun 2002, 3:08 PM
Curse you, Quaerion! Will you not meld out of the shadows and face my Orcs with honour? For shame! If only I had 17 more dexterity points.