| Re: Through the eyes of life by Angel_of_fait |
9-Jul-02/3:49 AM |
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Jeepers. This poeme is amazing. It really made me see through the eyes of life. Most 14 year old kids from Texas are among the most dangerously stupid individuals in the world. But you are completely different! Great job!
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| Re: Sonnet For a Porn Star by mikejedw |
8-Jul-02/5:27 PM |
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Similar to one I'm working on - so I appreciate the effort you've put into this. But why does the first line have 12 syllables?
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| Re: Walls by razorgrin |
24-Jun-02/1:29 PM |
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Does a stone wall stop a blind woman as surely as one who sees?
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| Re: Angelic Triumvirate by Sterling5583 |
19-Jun-02/6:44 AM |
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I'm just trying to help you, my child. One cannot expect to use poemeranker as a means of fuelling one's ego, lest there be weeping and gnashing of teethe. Forgive him, Lord Jesu, for he knows not what he says.
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| Re: Morning Glory by waltfreakinwhitman |
18-Jun-02/4:55 PM |
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I call this your desperate attempt to be crowned King of the Worst Poeme section. I suggest you stop deliberately trying to topple AIDS in a Van from its rightful throne! AIDS in a Van is so utterly crude and tasteless that it is bound to receive more zeros than any other. At least it would if you stopped giving it 10's.
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| Re: Waiting for things to Happen by nentwined |
16-Jun-02/5:36 PM |
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What is this 'toilin' you speak of? Some sort of toilet-linen? Balmilise me with it at once!
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| Re: How my head feels by Adriaan |
16-Jun-02/5:35 PM |
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Don't you think "and then it stops" slows down the flow of the poem somewhat? I think what you're looking for is a sort of counter-rhythm, but frankly it fails. You fail.
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| Re: beauty by Adriaan |
16-Jun-02/5:33 PM |
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I suggest that you read some poetry written in the last ten years! This is silly, silly nonsense.
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| Re: The Chessmaster by Sterling5583 |
16-Jun-02/5:32 PM |
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I THINK you'll find that children start out in life as a prawne! Silly, silly nonsense. I shall be contacting the FBI and bringing this so-called 'chess' to their attention at once.
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| Re: For Benjamin by moonUnit |
14-Jun-02/12:16 PM |
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I think that it is surely one of the greatest tragedies of society that your brother will not play with you just because you're black.
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| Re: take me back home again: by Sapphire |
14-Jun-02/12:07 PM |
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The more of your poemes I read, the more I am overcome with a sense of joy and splendour. I had no idea poetry could be so startlingly original. And so diverse as well. Keep up the good work, though I'm not sure how much more beauty my hearte can take before it is overwhelmed.
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| Re: Tainted by necroscope7 |
13-Jun-02/5:06 PM |
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My comments can seem harsh at times. But that's only because I am deliberately trying to insult you. I hope that this will give me great pleasure and hell, we might even learn a thing or two about self-esteem along the way.
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| Re: What Does it Mean to be Human by Sterling5583 |
13-Jun-02/9:05 AM |
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Being human means that you have the gift of shame. Humans must wear clothes, while sinful animals wander around in the nude. We also have the gift of speech, for it is blasphemous for animals to talk. Humans may dine on animals and treat them as lesser beings for animals have no morals. That is why vegetarians are foolish.
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| Re: wizard master by beakism |
12-Jun-02/8:00 PM |
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There once was a poet called 'Beakism'/Who was strong once but then became weakism/For writing 'bout Elves/Filled all of his shelves/Which fell o'er, and injured his cheekism.
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| Re: Ethnic Smells by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
12-Jun-02/7:51 PM |
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Your reply chilled me to the bum. I suppose you think you're standing up for ethnic minorities by giving a token 'concerned' reply, do you? Well, I've got news for you: I'm contacting the F.B.I. And you may lay to that.
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| Re: Angelic Triumvirate by Sterling5583 |
12-Jun-02/2:23 AM |
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Those angels were surely sent to torment us all! O' beloved Jesu! I beg of you! Remove the pen from this tyrant's sinful grasp!
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| Re: Lowest Common Currency by unknown |
12-Jun-02/1:44 AM |
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This poeme raises many issues.
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| Re: Concrete by beakism |
10-Jun-02/10:44 AM |
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| Re: The Haiku by beakism |
8-Jun-02/4:29 PM |
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I wot you were too lazy to write more as well!
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| Re: wizard master by beakism |
7-Jun-02/3:08 PM |
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Curse you, Quaerion! Will you not meld out of the shadows and face my Orcs with honour? For shame! If only I had 17 more dexterity points.
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