| Re: Dear Dad by liquidlama |
10-Jul-02/9:30 AM |
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My guess would be 'incredibly wide'.
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| Re: AIDS in a Glass by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
10-Jul-02/7:39 AM |
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Do you really think your token concern is going to help anyone? Is it going to cure any ill persons? No. It is not. If you feel so strongly about such issues, I suggest you stop wasting your time complaining about my wonderful poeme and start doing something useful like praying for them. Good day.
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| Re: Uninformed, pseudo-philosophical thoughts about existence by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
10-Jul-02/5:51 AM |
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| Re: The Lost Laugh by Roisin |
10-Jul-02/4:58 AM |
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I can relate to this poeme. I too felt immortal when I effortlessly broke wind.
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| Re: life by -=??lilaznjen??=- |
10-Jul-02/4:52 AM |
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and torture isn't bad? you're glad that life is torture? methinks you just wrote some meaningless drivel that happened to rhyme. I'm afraid you can't be top of the class today my child. However, you may be bottom. Take this dunce cap and go stand in the corner. Turn around. We don't want to see your face.
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| Re: Song of Spring by meror |
10-Jul-02/4:34 AM |
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Great! I'd always wanted to read another poeme about spring! And now I can! Bless you!
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| Re: Rented Romance by OneFingerAnswer |
9-Jul-02/11:43 PM |
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I'll thank you not to describe your revolting pornographic video rental habit on poemeranker. 'tis wickedness.
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| Re: Angel Cager by OneFingerAnswer |
9-Jul-02/11:41 PM |
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I don't get it man. Surely worthless peasants shall be deemed unfit to partake of the crusts of the elders?
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| Re: AIDS in a Glass by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
9-Jul-02/11:36 PM |
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AIDS is never funny. I'll thank you not to speak of such a serious issue in such casual tones. Good day.
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| Re: Where are you Eric? by Eric Johnson |
9-Jul-02/3:00 PM |
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I ask you: Is it your own God who causes your lines to stretch across the screen for several miles? O Cruel Jesu, I swear I didn't know it was the reserved plunger!
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| Re: The Second World by seebergerb |
9-Jul-02/2:59 PM |
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My God. Metaphor AND reification?!?!?! What will you think of next??
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| Re: Let me let me go by Eric Johnson |
9-Jul-02/2:58 PM |
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I once used a doily for a non-recommended purpose. That was unpleasant for everyone involved!
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| Re: Fascination by ObiWonKn |
9-Jul-02/2:57 PM |
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Well that's certainly a unique experience! Perhaps you would like to share your experiences of other things nobody has ever experienced before? I'm sure you have some powerful things to say about unrequited love!!
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| Re: lurcher for lunch - for James Kelman by roy rocket |
9-Jul-02/2:56 PM |
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I would have preferred it if you had included the word 'chin' somewhere.
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| Re: pinky swear by crin |
9-Jul-02/2:55 PM |
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It's called the handbrake, my love. And to think you call yourself a car expert...
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| Re: My Tongue ..... and God by BadPoet |
9-Jul-02/2:54 PM |
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O Jesu! I dare not think what would happen if you wrote erotic fiction. Delightful play-off of anatomy and religion!!!!!!!!!!
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| Re: Harry the Moon by Mimi & Vincent |
9-Jul-02/7:58 AM |
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My tumor gives me great pride. Thought I do agree that monies and stati make one's blind. Great line by the way.
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| Re: To the Sea by timfowler |
9-Jul-02/7:29 AM |
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While you, Sir, may hope for the breaking of tides deeper and unblessed from the salt-crust lips, I hope merely for the breaking of wind richer and unsmelt from the brown-crust cheeks. Good day.
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| Re: just like the jagged dagger by Angel_of_fait |
9-Jul-02/4:06 AM |
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You know, I read this poeme and thought: I am also just like the jagged dagger "sliceing" my life away.
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| Re: trapoide by Angel_of_fait |
9-Jul-02/3:56 AM |
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Beautiful..."people who shrug life, hug life and even sometimes mug life"... sheer genius. You know, people do sometimes mug life. It's an important issue which you have tackled with breathtaking clarity. Are you a pro?
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