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life (Free verse) by -=??lilaznjen??=- life is not good
life is not bad
life is just torture
that's why I'm glad
Up the ladder:
moist towelettes
Down the ladder:
The flower game
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 3.2727273
Posted: July 8, 2002 2:11 PM PDT; Last modified: July 8, 2002 2:11 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.1363635 Overall Rank: 13286 Comments:
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-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 217.39.43.235
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10-Jul-02/4:52 AM
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and torture isn't bad? you're glad that life is torture? methinks you just wrote some meaningless drivel that happened to rhyme. I'm afraid you can't be top of the class today my child. However, you may be bottom. Take this dunce cap and go stand in the corner. Turn around. We don't want to see your face.
Can we expound a bit?
Are you anusless or something?
um.........not the best work for sure...
-mega
10/10 for tragic garbage.
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