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The flower game (Free verse) by shwenatjadeflower
I am confused at myself and you. I do love you Very much so. A lot. I've known you since the first time I looked in your eyes And saw your soul It was beautiful. It still is and I am loving you right now. but do you love me? how can i know? I know you love me as a friend but the whole charade is getting pathetic do you love me or do you not? you love me? you love me not. you love me. you love me not. damn you i want to know. stop playing games. stop hiding you dont like her i know. you are just shy. dont want to hurt anyone well dammit i dont care. do you love me or not. you love me you love me not you love me? not? please tell me, you know who you are.

Up the ladder: life
Down the ladder: Ode to -=Dick_Angle=-

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.2727273
Weighted score: 4.1363635
Overall Rank: 13287
Posted: September 22, 2002 8:15 PM PDT; Last modified: September 22, 2002 8:15 PM PDT
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Comments:
[8] aperfecttool77 @ 12.221.0.73 | 22-Sep-02/9:15 PM | Reply
very good!
[4] deleted user @ 167.206.181.179 | 24-Sep-02/7:53 AM | Reply
it's over between us, i've told you a hundred times! now would you get over here and get all your clothes out of my closet! (i know you cheated on my with that guy in Texas, too!)
[1] <~> @ 167.206.181.179 > deleted user | 24-Sep-02/7:56 AM | Reply
she cheated on you with me, and i'm not even gay!!! (I think it was just because i'm a gardener, and the dirt under my nails REALLY turned her on)
[n/a] Christof @ 195.172.133.226 > <~> | 24-Sep-02/8:04 AM | Reply
Ooh dirty fingernails, yummm...
[1] <~> @ 167.206.181.179 > Christof | 24-Sep-02/8:09 AM | Reply
toenails, too christof
[4] deleted user @ 167.206.181.179 > <~> | 24-Sep-02/8:06 AM | Reply
i've never been so mad! how could you do this to me with another woman, and not invite me into the fold? or at least let me watch. take pictures? off to dry my tears of shame on a wadded tissue at the side of my bed.
[1] <~> @ 167.206.181.179 > deleted user | 24-Sep-02/8:08 AM | Reply
does that wadded tissue bear any sort of scented resemblance to a certain PILLOW?????
[4] deleted user @ 167.206.181.179 > <~> | 24-Sep-02/8:16 AM | Reply
they might smell the same.
[1] <~> @ 167.206.181.179 > deleted user | 24-Sep-02/8:18 AM | Reply
thought so.
[1] <~> @ 167.206.181.179 > deleted user | 24-Sep-02/8:15 AM | Reply
who's yer daddy???
[4] deleted user @ 167.206.181.179 > <~> | 24-Sep-02/8:22 AM | Reply
you are.
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