poemranker ::The flower game by shwenatjadeflower

DetailsThe poem, its numbers, and the conversation.

Free verse № 16597

The flower game

by shwenatjadeflower

Member since 2002 · Posted 22 Sep 2002 · 11 comments

I am confused at myself and you. I do love you Very much so. A lot. I've known you since the first time I looked in your eyes And saw your soul It was beautiful. It still is and I am loving you right now. but do you love me? how can i know? I know you love me as a friend but the whole charade is getting pathetic do you love me or do you not? you love me? you love me not. you love me. you love me not. damn you i want to know. stop playing games. stop hiding you dont like her i know. you are just shy. dont want to hurt anyone well dammit i dont care. do you love me or not. you love me you love me not you love me? not? please tell me, you know who you are.

Rate it

0 is the worst, 10 the best. Pick a number, add a comment if you like, then send it. Keys: 0–9 pick, Enter sends.

mean 3.27 weighted 4.14 rank 13274 views 172 View voting details →

11 votes so far. Yours would make 12.11 votes so far

11 comments

[8] aperfecttool77 22-Sep-02/9:15 PM Reply
very good!
[4] deleted user 24-Sep-02/7:53 AM Reply
it's over between us, i've told you a hundred times! now would you get over here and get all your clothes out of my closet! (i know you cheated on my with that guy in Texas, too!)
[1] <~> › deleted user 24-Sep-02/7:56 AM Reply
she cheated on you with me, and i'm not even gay!!! (I think it was just because i'm a gardener, and the dirt under my nails REALLY turned her on)
[n/a] Christof › <~> 24-Sep-02/8:04 AM Reply
Ooh dirty fingernails, yummm...
[1] <~> › Christof 24-Sep-02/8:09 AM Reply
toenails, too christof
[4] deleted user › <~> 24-Sep-02/8:06 AM Reply
i've never been so mad! how could you do this to me with another woman, and not invite me into the fold? or at least let me watch. take pictures? off to dry my tears of shame on a wadded tissue at the side of my bed.
[1] <~> › deleted user 24-Sep-02/8:08 AM Reply
does that wadded tissue bear any sort of scented resemblance to a certain PILLOW?????
[4] deleted user › <~> 24-Sep-02/8:16 AM Reply
they might smell the same.
[1] <~> › deleted user 24-Sep-02/8:18 AM Reply
thought so.
[1] <~> › deleted user 24-Sep-02/8:15 AM Reply
who's yer daddy???
[4] deleted user › <~> 24-Sep-02/8:22 AM Reply
you are.