poemranker ::My Tongue ..... and God by BadPoet

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Free verse № 127

My Tongue ..... and God

Member since 2001 · Posted 16 Mar 2002 · 6 comments

I can stick my tongue way out It's easy to inspect it. When there's lots of germs about I often disinfect it. No other bits come out on show ....my nose, my eyes, my chin. My tongue alone flicks to and fro The rest of them stay "in". So why did God make tongues this way How benefits mankind? If God were here perhaps he'd say "I had ice cream in mind."

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6 comments

[8] anonymous 27-Jul-01/3:18 PM Reply
:rofl: I love the punch line.
[8] anonymous 9-Sep-01/4:02 PM Reply
can i adopt you? lol
[n/a] nentwined 16-Mar-02/1:21 AM Reply
=) Whoohoo bad poetry! ;)
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 9-Jul-02/2:54 PM Reply
O Jesu! I dare not think what would happen if you wrote erotic fiction. Delightful play-off of anatomy and religion!!!!!!!!!!
[6] Jill Stockinger 14-Jul-02/2:44 PM Reply
Sweet, silly.
[6] deleted user 7-Aug-02/5:25 AM Reply
Fluffy and not serious poetry, but cute and clever.