poemranker ::lurcher for lunch - for James Kelman by roy rocket

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lurcher for lunch - for James Kelman

Member since 2002 · Posted 26 May 2002 · 7 comments

Aye fuck fuck it fuck the fuck fuck the fuckin fuck. The lurcher looked so forlorn. Fuck it and its look fuck it fuck everything fuck the fuckin fuck

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7 comments

[6] lilli 27-May-02/2:45 AM Reply
have you read tom leonard? I think you'd like him.
[5] nentwined 5-Jul-02/1:48 PM Reply
cute, but I've seen better...
[n/a] razorgrin 6-Jul-02/7:16 AM Reply
Fuck!:)
[n/a] jduzz 6-Jul-02/8:12 AM Reply
and you used the word "fuck" 13 times...
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 9-Jul-02/2:56 PM Reply
I would have preferred it if you had included the word 'chin' somewhere.
[0] Voth269 14-Jul-02/6:25 PM Reply
try to stay away from using one word so much.. it makes it quite boring that way..
[0] Voth269 14-Jul-02/6:25 PM Reply
try to stay away from using one word so much.. it makes it quite boring that way..