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lurcher for lunch - for James Kelman (Free verse) by roy rocket
Aye fuck fuck it fuck the fuck fuck the fuckin fuck. The lurcher looked so forlorn. Fuck it and its look fuck it fuck everything fuck the fuckin fuck
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Arithmetic Mean: 3.4545455
Weighted score: 4.2272725
Overall Rank: 13208
Posted: May 26, 2002 5:48 AM PDT; Last modified: May 26, 2002 5:48 AM PDT
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[6] lilli @ 134.226.1.114 | 27-May-02/2:45 AM | Reply
have you read tom leonard? I think you'd like him.
[5] nentwined @ 66.92.183.34 | 5-Jul-02/1:48 PM | Reply
cute, but I've seen better...
[n/a] razorgrin @ 142.166.108.176 | 6-Jul-02/7:16 AM | Reply
Fuck!:)
[n/a] jduzz @ 66.157.54.130 | 6-Jul-02/8:12 AM | Reply
and you used the word "fuck" 13 times...
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 62.190.174.80 | 9-Jul-02/2:56 PM | Reply
I would have preferred it if you had included the word 'chin' somewhere.
[0] Voth269 @ 67.209.189.105 | 14-Jul-02/6:25 PM | Reply
try to stay away from using one word so much.. it makes it quite boring that way..
[0] Voth269 @ 67.209.189.105 | 14-Jul-02/6:25 PM | Reply
try to stay away from using one word so much.. it makes it quite boring that way..
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