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A Wasted Day

by Joyleaf

Member since 2002 · Posted 26 Sep 2002 · Edited 27 Sep 2002 · 2 comments

I had motivation yesterday. Then two guys came by to fix an appliance. "We'll be back tomorrow, between ten and noon," they said as they walked out the door. So I stayed at home today. I waited. I waited for a long time. I ate some cereal with strange, dry marshmallows. I waited some more. It becomes obvious that these two guys are not returning. I would trade all of my marshmallow cereal for a job right now. But not today. Maybe tomorrow.

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[5] apples_tim 27-Sep-02/1:18 PM Reply
all I have to say to this is Huh! weird but pretty stylish.
[1] smlink84 16-Jan-03/9:28 PM Reply
Why do you write?