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Fascination (Free verse) by ObiWonKn
She used to like to sit on the rafters
and listen to me rehearse my
lines,
Monologues in an empty gymnasium
Freshly polished hardwood floor
My faded loafers squeaked
when I walked and
she?d giggle
I?d pace back
and forth,
Memorizing her
more than my lines
The way comets burst
from
her eyes
when I walked in front of her
She said the words sound more
interesting
when they bounce off a hardwood floor
She listened with
intent,
catching every syllable
She seemed fascinated with the drama
And
I ?
simply fascinated with her
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Weighted score: 5.9820137
Overall Rank: 1328
Posted: March 16, 2002 1:18 AM PST; Last modified: March 16, 2002 1:18 AM PST
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