Poemranker [Poem: Through the eyes of life] [by Angel_of

You are sick and so am i. we live and live untill we die. our lives will pass frome time to time. just so we can be of mind. we see our children laugh and play. we see our children grow each day. one day we saw our first grandchild. our hearts was beating so fast we smiled. where hase the time gone. maybe if we se our past then we will be at peace at last. Victoria Shanelle Nixon

[4] nentwined @ 66.92.183.34 | 9-Jul-02/3:00 AM | Reply

until has one l.
I don't understand "of mind".
our hearts *were* beating
hase -> has.
se -> see.

a cute poem, but didn't really move me.

[10] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 217.39.82.243 | 9-Jul-02/3:49 AM | Reply

Jeepers. This poeme is amazing. It really made me see through the eyes of life. Most 14 year old kids from Texas are among the most dangerously stupid individuals in the world. But you are completely different! Great job!

[6] forestchild7 @ 216.77.216.8 | 19-Jul-02/4:12 PM | Reply

nice, but work on the spelling...

[n/a] razorgrin @ 142.166.108.170 | 23-Jul-02/6:10 AM | Reply

This is the most inane drivel i've ever read."we live and live untill we die." no, really,thanks for clearing up that mystery. Learn to spell, for the love of god, that piece of ...something barely looks like English.

[6] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 1-Aug-02/1:05 PM | Reply

can someone please help me find my edition of plains of africa part 5, i forgot to copy and paste last night so i'm looking for it. it's in somebody's comment line from last night late. it has the cheetah siblings in it..its very dear to me so..i would appreciate it.cuz i'm putting all of the episodes together today..to see how it looks .thanks..oh. nice poem..err.thanksg

[2] <~> @ 167.206.181.179 | 1-Aug-02/1:24 PM | Reply

seek understanding / ye unripe adolescents / but not on this site.

[0] god'swife @ 209.179.137.249 | 2-Sep-02/9:22 PM | Reply

For the sake of my own sanity I'm going to believe you're actually a grown-up pretending to be a 14yr old who writes bad poetry. This can't be serious. It's completely illogical that someone who can read could write this poorly.