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Ambition?

Member since 2002 · Posted 23 Jul 2002 · 7 comments

Can you feel your heart beating? are you alive? Your mind is unsung because you're not driven. You need to wake up. activate your dreams. You know your dead and it's you your deceiving.

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[9] johnnyfontaine23 23-Jul-02/10:16 AM Reply

Reminds me of a girl i once knew.

[2] Mister Cakes 23-Jul-02/2:56 PM Reply

Not what i expected from the Tired Tyrant.

[n/a] deleted user 23-Jul-02/5:26 PM Reply

Another piece of brilliance from this man. He obviously feels strong about the state of the society we live in today. This man obviously doesn't follow the crowd and has a mind of his own.

[n/a] TheTiredTyrant 23-Jul-02/5:51 PM Reply

yes you are right i am a man.

[10] Art Glocken 27-Jul-02/8:57 AM Reply

this reminds me of the fat man on that song "wicked and your laaaazy"

[2] Bachus 19-Aug-02/1:38 AM Reply

sounds like a job for whoopi goldberg....ghost2 the reincarnation..vague canarys meet the cat quicker when singing barry manilow..

[1] Jeremi B. Handrinos 9-Nov-03/5:37 AM Reply

Chalk outline of a dead carrot.