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Ambition? (Free verse) by TheTiredTyrant Can you feel your heart beating?
are you alive?
Your mind is unsung because you're not driven.
You need to wake up.
activate your dreams.
You know your dead and it's you your deceiving.
Up the ladder:
Through the eyes of life
Down the ladder:
close to you and can't be still
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Posted: July 23, 2002 10:07 AM PDT; Last modified: July 23, 2002 10:07 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.2689414 Overall Rank: 13170 Comments:
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johnnyfontaine23 @ 195.92.168.167
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23-Jul-02/10:16 AM
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Reminds me of a girl i once knew.
Not what i expected from the Tired Tyrant.
Another piece of brilliance from this man. He obviously feels strong about the state of the society we live in today. This man obviously doesn't follow the crowd and has a mind of his own.
yes you are right i am a man.
this reminds me of the fat man on that song "wicked and your laaaazy"
sounds like a job for whoopi goldberg....ghost2 the reincarnation..vague canarys meet the cat quicker when singing barry manilow..
Chalk outline of a dead carrot.
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