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Ambition? (Free verse) by TheTiredTyrant

Can you feel your heart beating? are you alive? Your mind is unsung because you're not driven. You need to wake up. activate your dreams. You know your dead and it's you your deceiving.

DaRK__sTaR__55 23-Jul-02/5:26 PM
Another piece of brilliance from this man. He obviously feels strong about the state of the society we live in today. This man obviously doesn't follow the crowd and has a mind of his own.




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