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Ambition? (Free verse) by TheTiredTyrant

Can you feel your heart beating? are you alive? Your mind is unsung because you're not driven. You need to wake up. activate your dreams. You know your dead and it's you your deceiving.

Art Glocken 27-Jul-02/8:57 AM
this reminds me of the fat man on that song "wicked and your laaaazy"




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