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20 most recent comments by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. (2001-2020) and replies

Re: a comment on psudobackstabber by Freethinker1602 25-Apr-03/11:28 AM
HAHAHAHAHAHA you blocked it out and can't remember anymore? What utter B.S. The reason why you don't know exactly why you wrote this piece is that there is no reason. Or rather the reason isn't anywhere near as dramatic as you'd like to think. You probably just wanted to sound like someone who had been betrayed or something just to sound deep. Even if it is partly based on fact, it's almost certainly far too mundane an experience to be forcibly blocked from your memory because it's too painful. I suggest you write a poeme about a true tragedy - like why your life is so devoid of deepness and emotional complexity. Take me, for instance. I've got loads of emotions. I know loads about pain and betrayal. I've been through shit, man. Shit you wouldn't believe. Even if it landed right on your face. Did you know that sometimes, at night, I hear a strange crying sound coming out just below my nose?
Re: lusty by nolan 24-Apr-03/3:47 PM
Beautiful. I especially enjoyed "makes you weak / often to the point where you weep". However, may I suggest the following alteration: "makes you weep / often to the point where you weep". Oh, and "soul full of emotion" is the most beautiful thing I have ever read. Ever. Also, great use of lower case letters throughout - it adds a touch of class that I feel is so desperately lacking from contemporary western literature. Now all you need to do is garnish with neat handwriting and a light sprinkling of "i think it's important to smile and yeah so what if i'm different i still have loads of chilled-out friends"
Re: Truth in Lies by BleedingRose 23-Apr-03/7:53 AM
It's the truth. That's what holds more truth.
Re: isms and ities by Amelia 23-Apr-03/7:49 AM
YOU FORGOT JISM
Re: a comment on AIDS in a Glass by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 23-Apr-03/7:45 AM
AIDS isn't even a virus, you monumental fucking retard. It's a SYNDROME. An "ACQUIRED IMMUNE DEFICIENCY SYNDROME", if you will. HIV is the virus. A "HUMAN IMMUNODEFICIENCY VIRUS".
Re: god damn P.D.A. by sir_heff 23-Apr-03/7:40 AM
NICE EMOTIONS
NICE RHYME
YOU'LL BE A POPULAR POETE
IN NO TIME
Re: Fighting erosion by INTRANSIT 23-Apr-03/7:31 AM
I don't get it man. What's so fucking beautiful about it?
Re: a comment on the game by princesszoe 22-Apr-03/6:26 AM
1. "GO FUCK YOUR FACE IDIOT" isn't one of your usernames.
2. It can't be you who unjinxes you.
3. That you have based your entire life on "Gilded Stumps of Olde" and slowly realised that it isn't the Bible of Ace isn't my fault.
Re: a comment on the game by princesszoe 22-Apr-03/1:23 AM
you seem extremely nude.
Re: Lost and found by INTRANSIT 21-Apr-03/10:17 PM
Is this poem supposed to be shaped like a beehive?
Re: a comment on AIDS in a van by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 21-Apr-03/8:19 PM
To-day is -=Dark_Angel=-'s birthday. Good day.
Re: a comment on the game by princesszoe 21-Apr-03/8:05 PM
The only songs of yours I have personally listened to for long enough to hear a complete lyric are your "interesting" rendition of "The Crutchling" and the one where god'swife is droning on about her uterus or something. But I'm sure Settle and the other members of Club -=Dark_Angel=- are big fans.

Also, I'm having trouble understanding "indeed princes zoe is not dickless in the way that you are just a normal girl." Well, not really, it just seems beyond even you to assert that princesszoe isn't a normal girl but -=Dark_Angel=- is, and the reason she isn't a normal girl is that her dicklessness is somehow a separate affair from her being female.

You get really peed off at sarcasm, I have noticed. Don't bother with the "haha man I was joking had you going" reply, because I have already written down exactly what it will say, so you will literally be jinxing yourself if you post it (taking into account the time difference) and you will have to wait for someone to say your name out loud, and they only have about a 1 in 600 chance of getting it right what with all the usernames you've commandeered.

TTFN
Re: a comment on Music and Me by *Lyrisick* 21-Apr-03/4:56 PM
That's not a very good idea. UNLESS YOU WERE BEING IRONIC IN WHICH CASE IT IS THE IRONY SENSATION OF THE MILLENNIUM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1111111
Re: a comment on the game by princesszoe 21-Apr-03/4:50 PM
HOLY SHIT! LOL!! You mean -- the other day, you were mixing a song called 'a bazaar', and then -- get this -- you saw something else with the word 'bazaar' in it?!?!?!?! OMGOMGOMGOMG QUICK CALL STEVE MARTIN AND THE FIRE DEPARTMENT BECAUSE I HAVE JUST BURST INTO FLAME FROM EXCITEMENT AND ALSO IT IS THE COMEDY SENSATION OF THE MILLENNIUM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11
Re: a comment on Music and Me by *Lyrisick* 21-Apr-03/4:52 AM
http://www.angelfire.com/journal/thwarted/musicandme.html
Re: a comment on Hey! Shut up, and cut my grass. by horus8 21-Apr-03/4:13 AM
pff
Re: a comment on visual erotic by princesszoe 20-Apr-03/5:33 AM
How profound. You should be a poet! Oh wait! You are! Well done!
Re: a comment on visual erotic by princesszoe 19-Apr-03/8:04 AM
You remind me of a dwarf I once met in a public house in Twatshire. He would run up and down the bar, stopping at random intervals to squat and rattle a cup of change. Of course, he eventually escaped, and we never saw him again.
Re: a comment on Descent into Madness by thepinkbunnyofdoom 19-Apr-03/7:16 AM
Of course you do, my lad. Of course you do.
Re: a comment on Descent into Madness by thepinkbunnyofdoom 19-Apr-03/7:04 AM
The only dance you shall be dancing is the hideous dance of shame. Now put on your cloggs and begin.


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