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Music and Me

Member since 2002 · Posted 19 Apr 2003 · 8 comments

Thoughts unfold With every note that I hold No longer stressed, grievous Or damned, As I release with rhythm From my diaphragm Note come out like Diana Ross Saying what it is that I feeling no matter What the cost Out In the open Sounds created a crowd Reality fades into hoping Using my vocals to shout this out loud Never nervous about my skill Trying to help them understand And hoping they will I Know that you can know If I just keep this continual flow Of melody and music Blessed and gifted With this voice so I will use it

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[6] Jeremi B. Handrinos 20-Apr-03/1:25 PM Reply
Buy a dulcimer and hit the road, sounds like a hit. (of bad acid).
[n/a] -=SeTTle=- › Jeremi B. Handrinos 20-Apr-03/5:24 PM Reply
PSYCHED FOR THE POST EASTER CHOCOLATE SALES
[n/a] -=SeTTle=- 20-Apr-03/5:24 PM Reply
POMEGRANITE
[7] princesszoe 21-Apr-03/3:53 AM Reply
would like to hear it spoken
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. › princesszoe 21-Apr-03/4:52 AM Reply
[n/a] -=SeTTle=- › -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 21-Apr-03/8:04 AM Reply
HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA (IM TOTALLY GOBSMACKED)
[n/a] -=SeTTle=- › -=SeTTle=- 21-Apr-03/8:05 AM Reply
you should rearrange the words to create an all your base parody!
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. › -=SeTTle=- 21-Apr-03/4:56 PM Reply
That's not a very good idea. UNLESS YOU WERE BEING IRONIC IN WHICH CASE IT IS THE IRONY SENSATION OF THE MILLENNIUM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1111111