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Music and Me (Free verse) by *Lyrisick*
Thoughts unfold With every note that I hold No longer stressed, grievous Or damned, As I release with rhythm From my diaphragm Note come out like Diana Ross Saying what it is that I feeling no matter What the cost Out In the open Sounds created a crowd Reality fades into hoping Using my vocals to shout this out loud Never nervous about my skill Trying to help them understand And hoping they will I Know that you can know If I just keep this continual flow Of melody and music Blessed and gifted With this voice so I will use it

Up the ladder: House of Pain
Down the ladder: live for love

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.285714
Weighted score: 4.807899
Overall Rank: 11035
Posted: April 19, 2003 8:34 PM PDT; Last modified: April 19, 2003 8:34 PM PDT
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[6] Jeremi B. Handrinos @ 24.126.113.154 | 20-Apr-03/1:25 PM | Reply
Buy a dulcimer and hit the road, sounds like a hit. (of bad acid).
[n/a] -=SeTTle=- @ 68.14.26.239 > Jeremi B. Handrinos | 20-Apr-03/5:24 PM | Reply
PSYCHED FOR THE POST EASTER CHOCOLATE SALES
[n/a] -=SeTTle=- @ 68.14.26.239 | 20-Apr-03/5:24 PM | Reply
POMEGRANITE
[7] princesszoe @ 203.2.128.124 | 21-Apr-03/3:53 AM | Reply
would like to hear it spoken
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.212.215 > princesszoe | 21-Apr-03/4:52 AM | Reply
[n/a] -=SeTTle=- @ 68.14.26.239 > -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. | 21-Apr-03/8:04 AM | Reply
HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA (IM TOTALLY GOBSMACKED)
[n/a] -=SeTTle=- @ 68.14.26.239 > -=SeTTle=- | 21-Apr-03/8:05 AM | Reply
you should rearrange the words to create an all your base parody!
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.212.215 > -=SeTTle=- | 21-Apr-03/4:56 PM | Reply
That's not a very good idea. UNLESS YOU WERE BEING IRONIC IN WHICH CASE IT IS THE IRONY SENSATION OF THE MILLENNIUM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1111111
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