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House of Pain (Free verse) by Goose Darkness falls
we speak
the words drip
wet then soak
into spongy walls
of deceit
pass each other
in the hall
eyes never meet
but see all
crawl in bed
to try to tame
fury brewing in
our house of pain
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Posted: January 25, 2003 6:36 PM PST; Last modified: January 25, 2003 9:39 PM PSTWeighted score: 4.807899 Overall Rank: 11039 Comments:
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26-Jan-03/11:57 AM
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'House of Pain', isn't that a French bread shop?
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