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visual erotic (Free verse) by princesszoe
A look, a glance, a hint of underneath
Pointing at knowledge deeper than most
Visual erotic encased in her face
Blood red, velvet black, stark white
Pout makes extreme the thrills and passes over
Curves of flesh made a righter wrong
Dark and light lay down together
Innocent pretty meets lust made cloth
Feathers and fringes pinch waists to make peaches
Frills spill from the fabric kindling senses
Dangerous pieces show fancy restricted
Flippant whispers of some cloth, divine
Top to toe, she's bound to please
Legs lengthened, breath shortened, waist tightened
Flesh dressed to escape
Leads to bind are bound to lead her down the stairs
Cloth makes food of flesh wanting to go
Beyond the look and touch of hands
Mystery beckons
Dark and light lay down together
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.428571
Weighted score: 5.1152606
Overall Rank: 5989
Posted: April 16, 2003 3:57 AM PDT; Last modified: April 16, 2003 3:57 AM PDT
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