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Free verse № 47271

visual erotic

Member since 2003 · Posted 16 Apr 2003 · 10 comments

A look, a glance, a hint of underneath Pointing at knowledge deeper than most Visual erotic encased in her face Blood red, velvet black, stark white Pout makes extreme the thrills and passes over Curves of flesh made a righter wrong Dark and light lay down together Innocent pretty meets lust made cloth Feathers and fringes pinch waists to make peaches Frills spill from the fabric kindling senses Dangerous pieces show fancy restricted Flippant whispers of some cloth, divine Top to toe, she's bound to please Legs lengthened, breath shortened, waist tightened Flesh dressed to escape Leads to bind are bound to lead her down the stairs Cloth makes food of flesh wanting to go Beyond the look and touch of hands Mystery beckons Dark and light lay down together

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10 comments

[7] d35 16-Apr-03/9:43 AM Reply
some cliches but pretty kewl imagery
[7] richa 16-Apr-03/11:46 AM Reply
nice original use of language
but at times a bit distant
[7] Shardik 16-Apr-03/7:16 PM Reply
Asian sluts rock beavis.
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 17-Apr-03/10:06 AM Reply
name: zoe
age: 25


likes: meeting new friends, seeing old friends, having fun with all my friends, blah blah, dance, trance, dance-trance, garage, speed-garage, blah, hip-hop, trip-hop, trip-hip-hop, trance-hop, blah, friends, hanging with friends, trance, blah blah blah, being cool and hanging out, blah, friends, blah, must have lots of friends, blah blah, must be accepted by everyone, please, blah blah, christian woodworking, blah, trance.
[n/a] princesszoe › -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 19-Apr-03/7:28 AM Reply
dear mr angel

i asked for your opinion on my poem, not on me or my website

zoe
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. › princesszoe 19-Apr-03/8:04 AM Reply
You remind me of a dwarf I once met in a public house in Twatshire. He would run up and down the bar, stopping at random intervals to squat and rattle a cup of change. Of course, he eventually escaped, and we never saw him again.
[n/a] princesszoe › -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 19-Apr-03/10:18 PM Reply
your bitterness exhausts me. quite like some of your poems though.
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. › princesszoe 20-Apr-03/5:33 AM Reply
How profound. You should be a poet! Oh wait! You are! Well done!
[8] Caducus 21-Apr-03/2:34 AM Reply
A exfoliation of lust, like sugarcane.8
[n/a] princesszoe › Caducus 21-Apr-03/3:48 AM Reply
wow, i dont know what an exfoliation of lust is. but i like it .. thanks!