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visual erotic (Free verse) by princesszoe

A look, a glance, a hint of underneath Pointing at knowledge deeper than most Visual erotic encased in her face Blood red, velvet black, stark white Pout makes extreme the thrills and passes over Curves of flesh made a righter wrong Dark and light lay down together Innocent pretty meets lust made cloth Feathers and fringes pinch waists to make peaches Frills spill from the fabric kindling senses Dangerous pieces show fancy restricted Flippant whispers of some cloth, divine Top to toe, she's bound to please Legs lengthened, breath shortened, waist tightened Flesh dressed to escape Leads to bind are bound to lead her down the stairs Cloth makes food of flesh wanting to go Beyond the look and touch of hands Mystery beckons Dark and light lay down together

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 20-Apr-03/5:33 AM
How profound. You should be a poet! Oh wait! You are! Well done!




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