| Re: a comment on Descent into Madness by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
19-Apr-03/6:52 AM |
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No, I like it. You just don't understand how to use it. Also, I'm not asking whether you agree. I'm telling you a fact.
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| Re: a comment on Descent into Madness by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
19-Apr-03/6:45 AM |
I haven't "defined" this as not a poem. I haven't done any defining at all. You only need the vaguest notion of "poem" to see that this isn't one. Here is a proof:
1. If something is prose, it isn't poetry.
2. The above is (obviously) prose.
3. So it isn't poetry.
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| Re: a comment on My everything by FUJU |
19-Apr-03/4:51 AM |
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LISTEN TO THE SOOTHING MUSIC OF THE PAN PIPES
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| Re: a comment on "Mute nostril agony" Titled & inspired by Frass. by Bachus |
19-Apr-03/4:41 AM |
"I appologize for nothing,/but tomorrow"...
Beautiful. Simply beautiful. You have simultaneously captured the joy in my heart and the anguish in my bosom, spearing my beauty on rods of fiery ice. 10!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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| Re: a comment on Descent into Madness by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
19-Apr-03/4:36 AM |
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Nobody's questioning its status as a poeme. Everyone can see it isn't one. Once again, you have confused "poetry" with "prose that is sensitive and deep".
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| Re: a comment on Descent into Madness by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
18-Apr-03/11:00 AM |
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It's great that you're trying to do philosophy, Lunar! A+++ for effort!!!!!!!!1
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| Re: Stockport by Nicholas Jones |
18-Apr-03/10:59 AM |
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I'll thank you to call them "combat-suitable trousers".
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| Re: Axe Murderer by Blindproject217 |
17-Apr-03/11:42 AM |
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No, what you've done here is confused "poetry" with "angsty prose with semi-arbitrary linebreaks".
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| Re: visual erotic by princesszoe |
17-Apr-03/10:06 AM |
name: zoe
age: 25
likes: meeting new friends, seeing old friends, having fun with all my friends, blah blah, dance, trance, dance-trance, garage, speed-garage, blah, hip-hop, trip-hop, trip-hip-hop, trance-hop, blah, friends, hanging with friends, trance, blah blah blah, being cool and hanging out, blah, friends, blah, must have lots of friends, blah blah, must be accepted by everyone, please, blah blah, christian woodworking, blah, trance.
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| Re: a comment on Leaves by danny duke age 9 |
17-Apr-03/9:56 AM |
If he isn't a 9 year old, how brave is his effort? I think bravery of effort is inversely proportional to age. I also think bravery of effort tends to infinity if you are disabled. Here:
bravery = (1 / age) ^ (are_you_special)
where
are_you_special = 1 / (4 - number_of_wheels)
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| Re: Wandering Spirit by angel_uy |
17-Apr-03/9:50 AM |
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This is an epic poeme of epoch-making proportions.
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| Re: a comment on Descent into Madness by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
17-Apr-03/4:56 AM |
I think it stops being a poeme when you start using phrases like "What Iâm standing on is literally the ink my every written word". When that happens, you know you've run out of paper and have scribbled over the edge of your desk and onto the floor. In short, you've made a bosh. An absolute bosh.
Only a lunatic would read a poeme that started on paper, continued on desk, then finished on carpet.
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| Re: a comment on The Crutchling by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
14-Apr-03/7:39 PM |
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You may sound a little like the young Lou Reed, but don't you know that the dash in 'stain-ed' indicates that it's pronounced with two syllables, and is thus homophonous with the sentence, 'Stay, Ned.'?
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| Re: YOU ARE ALL WANKERS! by Bobjim |
9-Apr-03/8:17 AM |
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I can't tell whether the noise outside my window is faint industrial music or someone semi-rhythmically thumping a sheet of PVC.
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| Re: a comment on "Your shrimp cocktail", wide ass. by Bachus |
8-Apr-03/2:00 PM |
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KING'S PRAWNE TO KING'S PRAWNE 4
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| Re: "Your shrimp cocktail", wide ass. by Bachus |
8-Apr-03/1:59 PM |
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JUMBO SHRIMPE LOSES TO KING PRAWNE
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| Re: a comment on Fraternity hazing the sheepdog by horus8 |
8-Apr-03/1:40 PM |
PERHAPS IN A YEAR YOUR COMMENT WILL BECOME MEANINGFUL
LOL TO THE MAX
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| Re: a comment on The Golden Rule by Quarton |
8-Apr-03/1:38 PM |
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Bull fucking shit. I was taking him up the ass last night. He tried to cry out for help but I came before he could finish typing it.
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| Re: Did You Notice? by Bonehiss |
8-Apr-03/1:35 PM |
Opal moonlight
Plays coyly on my gilded cape.
Did you notice
My bloodied anguish
Drip down upon the scarlet garden?
AND SO FORTH IN THAT VEIN.
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| Re: a comment on Shit happens by Bobjim the II |
8-Apr-03/1:32 PM |
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