replying on My everything by FUJU
19 Apr 2003, 4:51 AM
LISTEN TO THE SOOTHING MUSIC OF THE PAN PIPES
replying on "Mute nostril agony" Titled & inspired by Frass. by Bachus
19 Apr 2003, 4:41 AM
"I appologize for nothing,/but tomorrow"...
Beautiful. Simply beautiful. You have simultaneously captured the joy in my heart and the anguish in my bosom, spearing my beauty on rods of fiery ice. 10!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Beautiful. Simply beautiful. You have simultaneously captured the joy in my heart and the anguish in my bosom, spearing my beauty on rods of fiery ice. 10!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
replying on Descent into Madness by thepinkbunnyofdoom
19 Apr 2003, 4:36 AM
Nobody's questioning its status as a poeme. Everyone can see it isn't one. Once again, you have confused "poetry" with "prose that is sensitive and deep".
replying on Descent into Madness by thepinkbunnyofdoom
18 Apr 2003, 11:00 AM
It's great that you're trying to do philosophy, Lunar! A+++ for effort!!!!!!!!1
on Stockport by Nicholas Jones
18 Apr 2003, 10:59 AM
I'll thank you to call them "combat-suitable trousers".
on Axe Murderer by Blindproject217
17 Apr 2003, 11:42 AM
No, what you've done here is confused "poetry" with "angsty prose with semi-arbitrary linebreaks".
on visual erotic by princesszoe
17 Apr 2003, 10:06 AM
name: zoe
age: 25
likes: meeting new friends, seeing old friends, having fun with all my friends, blah blah, dance, trance, dance-trance, garage, speed-garage, blah, hip-hop, trip-hop, trip-hip-hop, trance-hop, blah, friends, hanging with friends, trance, blah blah blah, being cool and hanging out, blah, friends, blah, must have lots of friends, blah blah, must be accepted by everyone, please, blah blah, christian woodworking, blah, trance.
age: 25
likes: meeting new friends, seeing old friends, having fun with all my friends, blah blah, dance, trance, dance-trance, garage, speed-garage, blah, hip-hop, trip-hop, trip-hip-hop, trance-hop, blah, friends, hanging with friends, trance, blah blah blah, being cool and hanging out, blah, friends, blah, must have lots of friends, blah blah, must be accepted by everyone, please, blah blah, christian woodworking, blah, trance.
replying on Leaves by danny duke age 9
17 Apr 2003, 9:56 AM
If he isn't a 9 year old, how brave is his effort? I think bravery of effort is inversely proportional to age. I also think bravery of effort tends to infinity if you are disabled. Here:
bravery = (1 / age) ^ (are_you_special)
where
are_you_special = 1 / (4 - number_of_wheels)
bravery = (1 / age) ^ (are_you_special)
where
are_you_special = 1 / (4 - number_of_wheels)
on Wandering Spirit by angel_uy
17 Apr 2003, 9:50 AM
This is an epic poeme of epoch-making proportions.
replying on Descent into Madness by thepinkbunnyofdoom
17 Apr 2003, 4:56 AM
I think it stops being a poeme when you start using phrases like "What Iâm standing on is literally the ink my every written word". When that happens, you know you've run out of paper and have scribbled over the edge of your desk and onto the floor. In short, you've made a bosh. An absolute bosh.
Only a lunatic would read a poeme that started on paper, continued on desk, then finished on carpet.
Only a lunatic would read a poeme that started on paper, continued on desk, then finished on carpet.
replying on The Crutchling by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
14 Apr 2003, 7:39 PM
You may sound a little like the young Lou Reed, but don't you know that the dash in 'stain-ed' indicates that it's pronounced with two syllables, and is thus homophonous with the sentence, 'Stay, Ned.'?
on YOU ARE ALL WANKERS! by Bobjim
9 Apr 2003, 8:17 AM
I can't tell whether the noise outside my window is faint industrial music or someone semi-rhythmically thumping a sheet of PVC.
replying on "Your shrimp cocktail", wide ass. by Bachus
8 Apr 2003, 2:00 PM
KING'S PRAWNE TO KING'S PRAWNE 4
on "Your shrimp cocktail", wide ass. by Bachus
8 Apr 2003, 1:59 PM
JUMBO SHRIMPE LOSES TO KING PRAWNE
replying on Fraternity hazing the sheepdog by horus8
8 Apr 2003, 1:40 PM
PERHAPS IN A YEAR YOUR COMMENT WILL BECOME MEANINGFUL
LOL TO THE MAX
LOL TO THE MAX
replying on The Golden Rule by Quarton
8 Apr 2003, 1:38 PM
Bull fucking shit. I was taking him up the ass last night. He tried to cry out for help but I came before he could finish typing it.
on Did You Notice? by Bonehiss
8 Apr 2003, 1:35 PM
Opal moonlight
Plays coyly on my gilded cape.
Did you notice
My bloodied anguish
Drip down upon the scarlet garden?
AND SO FORTH IN THAT VEIN.
Plays coyly on my gilded cape.
Did you notice
My bloodied anguish
Drip down upon the scarlet garden?
AND SO FORTH IN THAT VEIN.
replying on Shit happens by Bobjim the II
8 Apr 2003, 1:32 PM
I CONCUR WHOLEFARTEDLY
replying on Down Lovers Lane by Mr Pig
8 Apr 2003, 1:31 PM
I can't say I did. He sounds like a fag.
1. If something is prose, it isn't poetry.
2. The above is (obviously) prose.
3. So it isn't poetry.