Re: As the Redwood Ages by DurtKL	1-May-03/6:17 AM
I like the way you've used the condom as a metaphor for your face. My face is moist and supple.
Re: a comment on Whales by Jeremi B. Handrinos	30-Apr-03/2:54 PM
Not as shit as Oxford, by jove - we gave them an utter bosching at rugger last term!
Re: a comment on For her he swam with sharks by Shardik	30-Apr-03/9:13 AM
... and a little nappy to put on the pike should any unpleasantness occur.
Re: Pour vous en seul by e1ementfire	30-Apr-03/9:03 AM
You shall append the following line to your poeme: "et pour cette pomme de terre, qui j'adore de tout mon coeur"
Re: a comment on For her he swam with sharks by Shardik	29-Apr-03/2:44 PM
What if someone who had a really ugly face died by having their face pulped by a giant face-pulper then the blood splattered against the wall in the exact shape of Van Gogh's Sunflowers? Would that not be beautiful?
Re: a comment on Poems of Love by BleedingRose	29-Apr-03/2:32 PM
what's the matter bean boy? got too many beans on your bean?
Re: a comment on psudobackstabber by Freethinker1602	28-Apr-03/3:53 AM
Obviously, you've never had your groin run-over by a tractor. For if you had, you would never tell with such high zest, to turnips ardent for some desperate glory, the old lie: "pain is but a fleeting jest, and underpants tell stories" Pain doesn't exist? It's just you thinking you are hurt? Pain is an experience, buddy. I don't think any of your magical physicists or philospophers are denying the existence of experience.
Re: a comment on Death Of A Rose (New draft) by Mr Pig	27-Apr-03/9:07 AM
You can't blame the prawnes. They're just doing what they've been trained to do. If you had to spend six years in a Viet-Cong tiger cage, feasting on twigs and very small bits of gravel, then you'd probably be flying er... petals... straight into people's faces, too.
Re: Poems of Love by BleedingRose	27-Apr-03/3:38 AM
Would you like to hear a true story? Once upon a time I bought these water balloons. I filled one of the water balloons up with some water that I got from this tap so that it became really bulbous because it had loads of tap water in it. It felt really squishy and blobby and organic. So I got some lotion and balmilised it. Then I sat there stroking it and saying the words "mmm yes, it's a good breed".
Re: a comment on Truth in Lies by BleedingRose	27-Apr-03/3:30 AM
Do not attempt to have thoughts again. Or you may end up with a fridge landing on your face... my God, you'd be killed!!!
Re: Death Of A Rose (New draft) by Mr Pig	27-Apr-03/3:20 AM
Great use of the word "Like". Sometimes a metaphor can be too strong, can't it? May I suggest: DETH-ROSE Petals fall like bricks; piloted by vicious prawnes, they land on my face.
Re: No Tomorrow by Miggy	26-Apr-03/7:42 PM
Where bravery is your wealth? hahahahahaha
Re: a comment on The Bleeding Rose by BleedingRose	26-Apr-03/7:33 PM
That's OK! Poemeranker is a great place to share your work and learn more about poemes! It's also a great place to meet other Christians! At poemeranker we welcome poetes from all walks of life! We've even got one poete who's a truck driver! I think his name is INTRANSIT. Obviously he's barely literate, and probably doesn't even know what a kidney is. But that doesn't matter. There's no judgment here. Have a great time at poemeranker!
Re: a comment on Death Of A Rose (New draft) by Mr Pig	26-Apr-03/7:25 PM
spazmo
Re: I Speak of Expanses by anitawit	26-Apr-03/11:52 AM
nice repetative use of repeated repetition
Re: I Speak of Expanses by anitawit	26-Apr-03/11:51 AM
the repetitive use of repetition is nice
Re: I Speak of Expanses by anitawit	26-Apr-03/11:50 AM
nice use of repetition
Re: Crucifixion of a Man by marvelis	26-Apr-03/11:49 AM
The use of "rinkle" to rhyme with "trinkle" is inspired. Indeed, the use of "trinkle" alone sets this piece out from the... er crowd. The crowd of poemes. That are all crowding around my face. Also, great use of ravens to... well not to rhyme... because ravens doesn't really rhyme with heavens... but great use of ravens, anyway. I couldn't imagine a heaven without ravens. It would be like trying to imagine washing your car without a sausage roll sellotaped to your right knee. Imagine that. I did. But I made an absolute bosh of it.
Re: Scarlet Bridge by marvelis	26-Apr-03/11:37 AM
Great use of "talked" to rhyme with "walked" and "abridge" to rhyme with... "bridge". I especially enjoyed "Betrayal occurred". Are you a pro?
Re: Landscapes In The Sky by anitawit	25-Apr-03/11:44 AM
You have to be jolly creative to write a poeme about soaring on clouds.