Re: The Birds by lunar	1-Jan-03/4:37 PM
The film is better.
Re: if she only knew by ChunkyHunkyMonkey	2-Jan-03/5:49 PM
Hilarious!
Re: Nightwalker by Another Bobjim?!?!	2-Jan-03/5:59 PM
Replace the last word with "The victim's shoes are consumed."
Re: Just clubbing fur seals by <{Baba^Yaga}>	3-Jan-03/9:32 AM
Indeede my poeme is not a Vilanelle. I just made up the rhyme scheme and decided to call it a Vilanelle. In much the same way I used to call all my poemes Concrete because most people have no idea what the fuck Concrete is, and also because I found it amusing when people kept posting outraged comments saying "This aint concrete!" Oh, and by the way - This aint Vilanelle!
regarding some deleted poem...	3-Jan-03/1:37 PM
I just want to know one thing: does horus8 really have a Superman haircut?
Re: Caged by TxMstng02	3-Jan-03/1:43 PM
Beautiful. Simply beautiful. 10!!!1
regarding some deleted poem...	3-Jan-03/1:54 PM
Mine's shorter and contains no college words. GUTTED TO THE MAX.
regarding some deleted poem...	4-Jan-03/2:49 PM
I wish I knew what it was like to be obsessed with my gender.
Re: The poemranker desk by lunar	4-Jan-03/2:56 PM
"69" is the best bit.
Re: lost love by cherish	7-Jan-03/9:20 AM
My God! This poeme is so beautiful! 10/10!!!!!!!11
Re: Shark by cleverdevice	7-Jan-03/10:41 AM
Knives. The word 'knifes' is the third person singular of the verb 'to knife'. For insance, "The disgruntled weaver knifes your face with some knives."
Re: To the memory of Leonie Rysanek by vulcan	7-Jan-03/2:00 PM
"beautific Dream" - "beautific" is not a word. Though I suppose you could make it up and say it means "beautiful". However, "beatific" IS a word. Perhaps you meant to say "beatific"? If so, that's great! "Scores of tunes entuned and I deem" - what do you 'deem'? Doesn't make any sense at all! Though I daresay it does rhyme with dream! Great work! "O my brittle of a voice" - this line also doesn't make sense.
regarding some deleted poem...	7-Jan-03/6:12 PM
Your poemes are ace.
Re: Backwards baby blend by Blade	7-Jan-03/6:45 PM
For a minute I thought you were watching Brain Dead in reverse, but then I realised it doesn't have this scene.
Re: electronically by Quarton	7-Jan-03/6:48 PM
too many ellipses...tired theme the final verse...doesn't rhyme
Re: alms by famenglory	7-Jan-03/6:50 PM
THIS SURE IS GREAT.
Re: Apocalypse by marvelis	7-Jan-03/6:50 PM
I was in the Drawing Room, belaboring Colonel Mustard with the Shoe-horne. Where were you?
Re: Untimely Demise by marvelis	7-Jan-03/6:58 PM
So it is the people of average strength who will remain standing? I suggest you read my poeme "Unwanted gift".
Re: insomnia by Bill Z Bub	7-Jan-03/7:34 PM
If you removed the first bit and the title, it would be an ace ending to a tale of creeping horror.
Re: Bliss Eternal by Freethinker1602	7-Jan-03/9:04 PM
this is soooo beautiful lol ^_^ hey mbe l8er we can get together?? ok asl