Re: Dying In Silk (senryu) by scitz	4-Jun-03/9:45 AM
a bit short
Re: 11th September (a senyru) by scitz	4-Jun-03/9:47 AM
quite vivid but again a little too short.
Re: E tu trabajo el prostitute by <{Baba^Yaga}>	4-Jun-03/12:36 PM
"Making me who I am, not what I am liable to do." Surely the fact that you have written this poeme contradicts the idea that your magical experiences are so ineffable as to not affect your behaviour.
Re: Iterated Fuck by nentwined	4-Jun-03/12:45 PM
After discovering the audiostatic recordings of poemes on your website, I was disappointed to find that 'Iterated Fuck' was not among them. How dearly I would love to hear this read out in nentwined's sumptuous, erotic tones! Alas, I could not wait. Here is a recording I have made which represents, I believe, what it would sound like. http://darkangel.illfuckinghostit.com/bumwagon.html
Re: Karma by blankel	4-Jun-03/1:58 PM
Splendid!
Re: Platform by Exiled_humanity	4-Jun-03/4:38 PM
I think this could be quite a good poeme if you made it better. "It’s patched and dented", "It's frozen claws": Its "With in" (both times): Within "Chilling my frightened blood/Even more": Show, don't tell.
regarding some deleted poem...	4-Jun-03/5:09 PM
1. Make the first verse's rhythm less insipid. 2. Remove 'mere'. 3. Don't let anyone stand in the way of your dreams!!!
regarding some deleted poem...	4-Jun-03/7:16 PM
Oh holy jesus, a love "song" by John K. My monocle has popped off in surprise.
regarding some deleted poem...	4-Jun-03/7:36 PM
John K Song Extract Megapost I thought it was time John K finally got some recognition among the serious poetes of the site, and the best way to do that seems to showcase the stunning variety of subject matter and style he has mastered. Here, then, is a selection of extracts I feel really show what his songs have to offer! Remember, each of these is from a different song! ENJOY!!!!!!!!!!!!11111 "We’ll have the chance, another day To sing and dance, to laugh and play" "I know I need - you’re gentle touch I guess that I - love you too much" "Because she gives me a reason to get out of bed And I just can't seem to get her out of my head" "You are my reason to get out of bed You're the person stuck in my head" "Now we're just friends I thought that it would never end" "She makes me feeel like I'm on top of the world She makes me feel like I don't need another girl" "Have you ever seen two people madly in love? They've been given a gift from their God above" "I hope you know, how I feel about you I love you girl, and I wish you knew" "I used to be captivated by you But now I know that we are through" "I can't forget you, I can only try I will remember you until I die" "As I stand here watching my heart bleed I know you’re the only one I need" "A can of beer, that's all it will take To make you steer in the wrong direction and break" "No body sees you as you see yourself You always act like you're somebody else" "I never knew how much you meant to me Never knew what you could do for me" "I should've known better than to tell a lie That doesn't mean you should say goodbye" "I hope you know, how I feel about you I love you girl, and I wish you knew" BLAH BLAH BLAH BLAH BLAH BLAH A BLAH BLAH BLAH BLAH BLAH BLAH A YADDA YADDA YADDA B DINGLE PRINGLE CAN'T U C 10!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
Re: Bad Timing by DeadtotheWorld	4-Jun-03/7:42 PM
Well this is better than 90% of the stuff on poemeranker. I suppose that means I should rate it 9.
Re: The Outcry by thepinkbunnyofdoom	4-Jun-03/8:02 PM
A bold new sentiment! This is the first time anyone has ever expressed misgivings toward technology!!
Re: Crush Rejected by thepinkbunnyofdoom	5-Jun-03/3:54 PM
The phrase "my eyes bleed tears" is plagiarised from the following poeme by Roger Pfingston: http://www.2river.org/2RView/5_2/poems/pfingston1.html
Re: A Perfectly Reasonable Question by baughworm	6-Jun-03/1:25 PM
Is the question "Tea?"? Waiting at the kitchen table to tell someone off is one of the worst things in the world.
Re: The Truth of Death by Schizophrenic	6-Jun-03/2:38 PM
Death metal lyrics only have a point when accompanied by actual death metal.
Re: Abortion by horus8	6-Jun-03/7:05 PM
Chores: 1. Recycle my cans 2. Find another paper-route 3. Have an abortion 4. Buy some toast
Re: sharkmouth by Bill Z Bub	7-Jun-03/7:16 PM
This poeme contains the word 'shark' which is contained in the username 'darkshark' which contains the word 'dark' which is also in the username '-=Dark_Angel=-'. A little suspicious, don't you think?
Re: Blinded by lunar	8-Jun-03/5:10 AM
Premature Nappy Removal (Free verse) by -=Dark_Angel=- As it pours out onto the sheets Globules splatter my face and skin I'm drenched in a monstrous shower of my own feculence O Jesu, what have I done...
Re: Beam reach by INTRANSIT	9-Jun-03/9:39 AM
An Unfortunate Gybing Incident (Horror) by -=Dark_Angel=- Ready about! Lee ho! *squelch* O Jesu, what have I done....
regarding some deleted poem...	9-Jun-03/6:45 PM
balls ass balls and ass balls balls ass ass balls and ass
regarding some deleted poem...	9-Jun-03/6:47 PM
What would you say if I told you I had transcribed this poeme onto a fine linen handkerchief, used it for an Embrowning, then placed it into a moist knapsack and stored it in a special drawer?