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Blinded (Free verse) by lunar
As it pours down in sheets,
Droplets spear my face and skin
Im drenched in an instant,
This downpour mirrors the loss i feel within.
Through its river i wonder forth,
Blinded, i call your name
As i reach up to wipe my eyes,
My lashes i find soaked not with rain,
But the tears i cried.
There is no shelter,
And i dont know how long the grief will last
I am already soaked to the skin,
All i can do is wait and hope this storm will pass
And sunlight will dance on my face once more.
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Weighted score: 5.179294
Overall Rank: 4815
Posted: May 19, 2003 1:54 PM PDT; Last modified: May 19, 2003 1:54 PM PDT
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