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Walk in the Dark (Free verse) by Carvaceous
To walk in the dark requires skill Thus you might avoid the pounce of a scream If not tread carefully guilty claws you might feel tapping from shoulder to spine They pierce through flesh but wince not in pain Until bone is hit. Skip along ever quietly for fear the pounce of a scream If not claws then perhaps fangs you'll meet. But become acquainted first with the rancid breath upon your neck Slinking down your collar Tickling each rib Playing upon your stomach Permeating the air with its bitter taste It will settle in your throat almost suffocatingly Gag upon it and swallow it down Try to spit it out, all done in futility It claws at your throat with such fervor It's in escapable.

Up the ladder: oh it hurt so much
Down the ladder: Blinded

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.6666665
Weighted score: 5.179294
Overall Rank: 4814
Posted: March 1, 2003 12:31 PM PST; Last modified: March 1, 2003 12:31 PM PST
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Comments:
[8] Garrett S Sexton @ 213.122.114.88 | 1-Mar-03/1:21 PM | Reply
You say in-escapable,but Harry had an uncle, and he escaped from Azkaban.I know it's only fiction,but well it was still amazing that he could do that.

Then there is Buck Rogers,he got out of the 20th century.FUCKING A!

Ron Weasley can fart,did you see Thunderpants.

Im going to give you an 8
[8] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 1-Mar-03/7:47 PM | Reply
It was great until you used the word settle. 0 nah i must be fair 0!
[9] Freethinker1602 @ 68.48.88.129 > horus8 | 3-Mar-03/7:42 PM | Reply
Thou vile creature bite your tongue till the taste of blood fills your palate. the things you say to others only further proove that you have a most heinous nature towards yourself.
[9] Freethinker1602 @ 68.48.88.129 | 3-Mar-03/7:43 PM | Reply
Nice. Then you must know what it is to feel that you search and seek to destroy. That you alone are responsible for certain...things.
[8] Topaz Servias @ 68.100.154.95 | 5-Mar-03/7:20 PM | Reply
I just realized something....We can't communicate by E-mail...but do your parents know you have "THIS" account? We can leave note to each other this way.....
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