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Walk in the Dark (Free verse) by Carvaceous
To walk in the dark requires skill
Thus you might avoid the pounce of a scream
If not tread carefully
guilty claws you might feel tapping
from shoulder to spine
They pierce through flesh but wince not in pain
Until bone is hit.
Skip along ever quietly for fear the pounce of a scream
If not claws then perhaps fangs you'll meet.
But become acquainted first with the rancid breath
upon your neck
Slinking down your collar
Tickling each rib
Playing upon your stomach
Permeating the air with its bitter taste
It will settle in your throat almost suffocatingly
Gag upon it and swallow it down
Try to spit it out, all done in futility
It claws at your throat with such fervor
It's in escapable.
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.6666665
Weighted score: 5.179294
Overall Rank: 4814
Posted: March 1, 2003 12:31 PM PST; Last modified: March 1, 2003 12:31 PM PST
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Then there is Buck Rogers,he got out of the 20th century.FUCKING A!
Ron Weasley can fart,did you see Thunderpants.
Im going to give you an 8