Re: A Shining Light by mikehi	9-Jun-03/7:21 PM
DENVER THE LAST DINOSAUR HE'S MY FRIEND AND A WHOLE LOT MORE
Re: one man opponent by chinstrap	10-Jun-03/9:46 AM
If they didn't contain completely different words, I'd say this was plagiarised from my epic piece "Enabled". -10-!!!
Re: B-Movie Video Voiceover Guy by spank me baby yeah	10-Jun-03/11:08 AM
'Get it ready, will you?' was the answer, uttered so savagely that I started. The tone in which the words were said revealed a genuine bad nature. I no longer felt inclined to call Heathcliff a capital fellow.
Re: "How Often, Under Starry Skies" by anastomosis	10-Jun-03/4:04 PM
A subtle yet resonant piece. The colourful imagery and bewildering rhyme scheme are reminiscent of some of the later works of Tennyson, and even Chives. The rather pallid references to leukaemia, though somewhat out of place in a poeme about suicide, add a touch of humility that I feel is so badly lacking from contemporary western literature. This reviewer looks forward to anastomosis's next, even riper, comment deletion. -10-
Re: moment in time by calilegzzz	11-Jun-03/4:30 AM
I no longer feel inclined to call you a capital fellow.
Re: Grampa's Proverb by OneFingerAnswer	12-Jun-03/4:54 AM
Grandfather's Proverb (Haiku) by -=Dark_Angel=- In his shaving vest Grandfather is more than old: He's a lunatic.
regarding some deleted poem...	12-Jun-03/8:06 AM
-=Dark_Angel=-'s Fun Facts #45: Every process of the female body corresponds to a beautiful, sacred mystery!!
Re: Ga-go, Part two of that same play, the suspensefull climax. by Jeremi B. Handrinos	12-Jun-03/8:10 AM
You wrote this in Microsoft Word.
regarding some deleted poem...	12-Jun-03/8:43 AM
You forgot about IgotIssuez99 aka skateboardgurl5799. Her emotional resignation speech can be found here: http://www.poemranker.com/comment-recentbyuser.jsp?id=7953
regarding some deleted poem...	12-Jun-03/1:53 PM
You're not Kurt Vonnegut, so stop writing such insipid bollocks. Thanks!
Re: Fate Sucks by Kitch	12-Jun-03/5:38 PM
"Fate: why don't you just shit off?" (Free Verse) by -=Dark_Angel=- I have mixed feelings about fate, So I'm going to use this line to rhyme it with hate. Have faith in it, Because if the previous line made any sense, Then it wouldn't sound like a load of complete balls. blah blah blah something always falls.
Re: Advise by Audaciouslilgrl	12-Jun-03/5:44 PM
why don't you go and put your d in a vice.
Re: Something You'll never understand by thepinkbunnyofdoom	12-Jun-03/7:25 PM
Yes, how could an adult ever expect to understand the mind of a teenager? They just don't know what it's like!
Re: Once by phoenixxx	14-Jun-03/9:28 AM
The first two lines are plagiarised from 1984 fag.
Re: One Night from Now by phoenixxx	14-Jun-03/9:32 AM
Did you write this poeme by writing down a list of all the words you think would appeal to a 14-year-old girl, randomise their order, and then just insert other words between them to create sentences?
Re: Think by phoenixxx	14-Jun-03/9:34 AM
I guess not. But maybe you can make up for it by writing about your uninteresting emotions in an uninteresting way!!
regarding some deleted poem...	15-Jun-03/7:14 AM
To do ----- 1. Find exotic-sounding word in dictionary. 2. Write another identical, tedious love song.
Re: Seven by Dangzter	15-Jun-03/4:08 PM
http://www.everybodysmile.biz/eadenlilley/evnts/2028
Re: Empty by leviathan	16-Jun-03/12:06 PM
I too have frequently delivered myself of the opinion that the satin walls of purposeful isolation have tasted betrayal and, much like the vengeful Sun, have succumbed to the raindrops of concrete complexion. Nevertheless, one cannot but wonder from time to time that perhaps one's opinions, though artfully decorated in the plush velveteen plumes of purposeless consolidation, make about as much sense to non-spastics as the senseless ramblings of a half-baked nincompoop with some heavy shopping. Halos were never meant to rust, my friend. Never meant to rust...
Re: I Offer Me by leviathan	16-Jun-03/12:17 PM
Prostitution certainly is an important issue.