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Empty (Free verse) by leviathan
It is cold in this place
As if the satin walls of purposeful isolation
have tasted betrayal
and much like a vengeful sun
have succomb to the raindrops of concrete complextion
It is as if every angelic voice
that ever breathed life in this place
finds now no use for copper blood
too much does it tarnish
when halos were never meant to rust
Empty because every color takes without leaving any
Empty besides angry clouds that never forget my face
Tarnished as all skin has already turned
Angry as every dream falls empty as it burns
Wrong to believe that the sun will find strength to be alive again
Wrong to believe that anything in this place ever gave a damn
Wrong to believe that I shouldnât die for what I am.
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Weighted score: 4.880797
Overall Rank: 10215
Posted: June 15, 2003 5:04 PM PDT; Last modified: June 15, 2003 5:04 PM PDT
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