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A Little Cold Spot (Free verse) by emeraldskies There's a space
Empty and waiting
Someone should fill it
As I rest and sleep
I run my hands over
The cold spot
The empty sheets
And I wonder
Where you are
And if you ever
Think of me
And if you save
That cold spot
Like I save mine
Just for you
Up the ladder:
Empty
Down the ladder:
Celebrate
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Posted: July 8, 2003 7:04 PM PDT; Last modified: July 8, 2003 7:04 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.880797 Overall Rank: 10216 Comments:
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<{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.113.154
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8-Jul-03/7:42 PM
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That could be chiseled more, but it's much better.
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emeraldskies @ 67.200.132.177
> <{Baba^Yaga}>
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8-Jul-03/8:10 PM
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Thanks...the others I posted are older, the first one I made was a more recent one...
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